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for Plaything

by Malfoywhore

person Nicole
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow.... I\'ve missed reading this story...
Brilliant as always.
person nesscafe
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I had thought that you gave up writing this amazing story! I am always torn when I read it. On one hand the HG/SS fan in me wants her to love her captor and kill Lucius, but on the other hand I want her to be free. *sigh* I hope this means you will be finishing this story! I look forward to reading more!
person Laerai
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hermione has almost become like Snape in some respects with the careful plotting and watching. But at least for her it is for the right reasons. A great chapter. Glad you picked this up again!
person ...
schedule September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
if only u\'d write somemore.
hope volde comes into the pic
person Sarah T.
schedule August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please continue with this INCREDIBLE story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I just must have more. This fic has made me excited, enraged, anxious, and sad. I was even too choked up to continue for awhile. I can\'t believe you managed to turn this deceptively simple story into such an emotional work of art. Please continue writing if not with this story.
person ineedmore
schedule August 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
PLEASEEEEE update you have done wonderfully so far :) no update since june :( so PLEASEEEE update!!
thanks
person DarkFire
schedule August 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait to read when Hermione kicks their ass making t5hem fight between them. Love it. Update ASAP. ;P

DF
person whirleeQ
schedule August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a powerful - yet very disturbing - story you are weaving here! I do hope you update soon. One thing I am curious about though, is that in canon and most of fanon Hermione is a very powerful witch. Wouldn\'t her inherent magic start going haywire at some point, due to the extreme stress and emotional instabilty she is dealing with? Unpredictable things do happen around wandless wizards/witches when provoked after all... also, I think it might be interesting to have her inherent magic increase by drawing from her two captors as she gains more emotional power over them... Also it might be interesting to hear a Harry POV when he finds out that she is indeed \'alive\'... just my thoughts. Anyway, I hope you update soon. I\'m enthralled!
person Apollonia
schedule August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is truly one of the BEST DAMN stories I\'ve ever read. The dark aura of the stroy is perfect. The feelings of the characters for each other and their situation breathes expression beyond belief. I absolutely love it!!!! BTW, when are we going to see Draco\'s sexy ass again? He didn\'t get to finish what he started. *grins evilly* Please update soon. ;)
person Anon
schedule August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
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