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by Malfoywhore

person Fiery Slut
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOO! You
person AnaNg
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just found this yesterday and I\'m really digging it! Please update soon, it\'s addictive! I was late to school last night because I was so hooked! :)

Ana
person ShagsTheDustmop
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Go Hermione, Go! Show those SOB\'s who\'s the boss :)
person Galuwen
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damn, she almost slipped, but I think she did it on purpose. This story rocks! I have to admit that I\'m a big Lucius fan. I think he\'s gorgous. I also like Snape, but not as much. This story is really interesting. I wonder what will happen now. It seems she\'s got them almost were shnts nts them. A little more and they just might be putty in her hands if she plays her cards right. I am really looking forward to reading what will happen next. I wonder if Hermoine will start to care for them even in the slightest. I really looking forward to find out. Please keep up the great writing, and update soon please!!!
person SillyLily
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank YOU for updating!!! Please continue to do so!!!
person Corazon
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit! I hope you update soon!

BTW, I am glad to see you back!

Hugs,
Corazon
person white raven
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Thrilled to hear you updated. You and I share the same editor and she made my day by informing me you had put a new chapter out here. Brilliant read. The balance of power has indeed shifted. One thing I\'ve enjoyed in particular with this chapter is the undercurrent of erratic behaviour from Snape. It isn\'t overt, which makes him even more unpredictable and keeps the reader guessing as to what he will do or say next. Perfectly Snape in my opinion. Only a few spots where I felt he may have softened somewhat more than necessary, but understandable. We are privy to his inner thoughts, as well as his outer actions so we see what he doesn\'t show on the surface.

Well done! And I hope there isn\'t as long of a wait for chapter 13.
person Lidra
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This a great fic. When I read the rape parts, I said \"Shit, this is really fucked up\". Not the story itself, the rape. But it was great. Severus was always a prick, but to return to the dark side? And take his own (former?) student as a sex slave? Then he was always the bastard everyone thought hi be. be.
person Stratyllis
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ohh Hermione did the on purpose didn\'t she? The little bitch! That is so cool. Please don\'t wait so long before updating again. I need my Plaything.
person Andrian
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Finally you updated. and whew...fans face...by the way would Hermione be more rounded because of a oops we didnt take precautions thing