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for Control

by Pookabunny

person erin
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
booya! go ginny go ginny! whos got control now huh? huh? heehee, i loved this, it was so hott, and it was awesome that she got control in the end, it was just what he needed-to be shown that he cant always be in control mwahahaha! great story!
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... this story is interesting... OKAY, this joint was HOT! Really, I liked the story. ver ver really thought about the Tom and Ginny connection before--at least to this extent that you\'ve written. Now, I\'m considering writing a one-shot about it.

I\'ll be back for more!

Ciao!
person frephoephoenix
schedule November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
person franthephoenix
schedule November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AHAHAHA - SNAKESEX! You loveable perv (who is off writing furiously and away from the net for a day or two...) Hope it\'s going well, and you\'re enjoying yourself as much as I\'m enjoying this!
person fran again
schedule November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
<33333

Hot *and* humourous. I\'m dying here.
person jeskia
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
excellent. write more, please?
person Liv
schedule September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!!! Write soon...I love these Tom fics!!
person Sarah
schedule September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dammit Karen, if I were lesbian I\'d so hump your brains out! This story gets more \"orgasmic\" with each chapter... the more I read the hornier I get! I absolutly adore the ship between Ginny and Tom, thanks tou you!, and this story makes it that much more adoring. Yeah, now I REALLY need to get laid tonight... I don\'t care if Corey\'s gay. I could take a few lessons from Tom. I could get Corey then, eh? Muahahahaha... *runs off to \"Control\" Corey*...

P.S. Keep it \"up\" woman. If this gets anymore enticing I\'ll explode! Looking forward to more... Sarah
person Talene
schedule September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Will you be sending her to Voldemort? That would be interesting. I like this story so far......It\'s lovely!
schedule August 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW!
I had read the first two chapters earlier and was going to leave you a review about the snakes.d thd then I didn\'t get around to it for a day or two.
So - then I sit down today and figure I might as well finish chapter three before reviewing and ...
WOW... I\'ve lost my train of thought...WOW...where was I?

I really should leavu a u a review about the snakes - how wonderfully clever and imaginative they are.
But WOW - I keep thinking about chapter 3. I mean...she\'s standing there... and Tom is... and Ron is
droning on and on... Oh - that was good!

I REALLY like fics where people remember that this is a MAGICAL world we are talking about here.
All three of your chapters do that very nicely.

I hope you continue with the remainder of your 10 chapters you mentioned at the beginning.