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May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AGH! You went all romantic on us! haha. I loved it. Typical Ron, but the twins made me laugh! I love it when innocents like Ron and Hermione get told stuff like that. Their faces are priceless. *snickers at memory* Anyway, waiting impatiently for the next bit.
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May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOL. I\'m shocked by Snape\'s references to sex - I thought he was much more uptight than that! Nice little semi-twist at the end with the \"silver eyes,\" and I\'m glad that Hermione and the Gryffindors are suitable shocked. So - to chapter two - and beyond! Helen x
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May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I liked that this chapter was a little bit longer - I do get annoyed with paragraph chapters. Do you know if there\'s anyway to justify the text? Persoanlly, I find it easier to read that way, dunno about you.
Loved Ron\'s \"must be polyjuice\" thing - deluded fool. Doesn\'t he know that Draco is irresistable to men and women alike (but hopefully not children)?!? And Draco just drips cool - the \"hard anal fucking\" comment and the \"you think you\'re the only one who gets arroused by this?\" were lol-worthy, and the mirroring between the book and the action at the end worked really well. I thought when you described it it might be difficult to make work in practise, but you acheived it well.
Also, it\'s nice to know that Draco wouldn\'t go all the way on a first date, after all, he\'s just not that sort of boy, is he?? *grins* He\'s definately in control in the relationship so far - hope to see Harry \"getting his groove back\" a little in future.
Anyway, I\'m afraid I must sleep now, but I\'ll attempt to read the rest tomorrow and should be ready to beta ch 6. Helen x
Loved Ron\'s \"must be polyjuice\" thing - deluded fool. Doesn\'t he know that Draco is irresistable to men and women alike (but hopefully not children)?!? And Draco just drips cool - the \"hard anal fucking\" comment and the \"you think you\'re the only one who gets arroused by this?\" were lol-worthy, and the mirroring between the book and the action at the end worked really well. I thought when you described it it might be difficult to make work in practise, but you acheived it well.
Also, it\'s nice to know that Draco wouldn\'t go all the way on a first date, after all, he\'s just not that sort of boy, is he?? *grins* He\'s definately in control in the relationship so far - hope to see Harry \"getting his groove back\" a little in future.
Anyway, I\'m afraid I must sleep now, but I\'ll attempt to read the rest tomorrow and should be ready to beta ch 6. Helen x
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May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awww! KAWAII! Draco not wanting to lose any of Harry\'s \'love\' marks. *grins wildly* I love it!
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May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg the boys did it, finally! X)
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May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*poke*
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May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is fantastic slash. I love it like I would love another slash, but moreso. Well structured, well written, well everything :)
*worships*
*worships*
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May 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is getting to sound intresting! *drool* grea plot by the way and even greater lemons! keep up super duper great job! cant wait for the next chappie! ^-^
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May 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
^^;;;;...
omg i\'ve been laughing so hard my roommate\'s asking if i\'m ok
Snape reading that lurid book aloud, addin his own comments, was just sooo funny!
not to mention that it created a perfect deja vu for the scene where he reads and quotes from the Daily Prophet in GoF..+)
do hope there\'s more coming!! X)
omg i\'ve been laughing so hard my roommate\'s asking if i\'m ok
Snape reading that lurid book aloud, addin his own comments, was just sooo funny!
not to mention that it created a perfect deja vu for the scene where he reads and quotes from the Daily Prophet in GoF..+)
do hope there\'s more coming!! X)
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May 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AH HAHA H you you horny little sod! Draco you cock tease! I absolutely LOVE this fic! Such an original idea, makes a lovely change to have a new idea every now and again! I applaud you! LOL at myself getting all silly. Waiting for next bit! I wanna see the reciprocation! Spoonie.