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schedule May 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
grr. Ron is being such an ass! Harry needs to figure out how to get them on more friendlier terms, huh? I hope to see more soon! :)
*puts in favs*
person Hottie
schedule May 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! th@t first chappie wsa SOOOOOOOOOOO embarassing
person Hottie
schedule May 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
2nd chapter- BOOYAH!!!~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


~Jamie~
person Helmione
schedule May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Three

person Helmione
schedule May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Five

I really liked the opening paragraph
person Helmione
schedule May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think the argument did work, you can see that Harry would take Malfoy\'s side bse tse there\'s getting to be a real sense of division, and kind of Ron and Hermione in reality versus Harry and Draco in crazy surreal fantasy kind of thing. I mean, Hermione\'s being open minded and Harry still wants to be friends and stuff, but there\'s still a real sense of separation between them.

Also, I love Draco not wanting tse tse the marks - it\'s like the perfect mingling of corrupt sex and sentimentality!

Helen x

p.s. I think I\'m up to date now, so if you send me the next chapter when it\'s done, I\'m happy to beta.
person Thjorska
schedule May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Bah, I do the beta reading around here! :P

Excellent story, as always. It does things to me that I can\'t describe without feeling hellz embarassed.
person Tobothor
schedule May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A wizard\'s staff has a knob on the end.
person Saturday Night Fever
schedule May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow, another dosage of delicious fluff!
just a perfect beginning for the weekend X)

cackles over lee jordan\'s quidditch comments,
and why did i never notice adrian\'s surname\'s pucey?! hmph..

naming harry\'s supposedly crush \'cho\', a close one to \'Jo\' herself, wonder where Rowling gets her names\' inspiration, hmm..

oh btw, screw the weasel!
the rest of the population can do with one less freckled red hair
person Venecian Summer
schedule May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
the italics are quotes from the book right? (was kinda getting bit confused between the book part and reality part ^^;)
cool, =) it\'s beautiful to see draco and harry together

oh, the the shock!horror! on the virginally innocent hermios fas face while listening to the twins\' vast knowledge of s*x books and, hmph, if ron can\'t accept harry is happy with someone who loves him, screw his \'best friend\' friendship!