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January 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this story. I'm a completely straight female but I love reading about the two hottest guys from the Harry Potter series lol. I just didn't understand why Draco seemed scared that it wasn't real and then turned around and acted like he wanted nothing to do with Harry.
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October 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was so hot. But then wtf!
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October 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this. There are some confusing letters that I belied are supposed to be words but your ideas and the way they are written is beautiful.
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September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh that was entirely wonderful!!! and i just love the slip-up with snape mwahaha
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woah. This was really good. I hadn't honestly been expecting a plot, but it was interesting enough. Although what exactly happened to Snape does escape me since you last mentioned him with bloodly knees walking through Hogwarts. Nice job with this. Original.
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June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG....this is such a hot story! *drools* I luv me some Draco/Harry
Your fantastic....
Your fantastic....
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome fic. Amazingly well written and one of the most original plots I\'ve come across here on AFF. Great job!
xoxox,
Liz
xoxox,
Liz
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
After these many years (and it has been more than one year) I still absolutely love this. This was the story that introduced me to the world of Harry Potter fanfic, and more importantly, slash.
Thank you, Keshu. Thank you :)
Thank you, Keshu. Thank you :)
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
cute. very very cute. and quite surprising. great hints about the book there, btw. stupendous job.
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March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Few works of fanfiction, whatever the subject inspires them, have a scope similar to The Erotic Adventures of Potter and Malfoy. The twelve chapters of this novella are exceptionally well crafted, and the plot is well-sustained throughout and driven by realistic characters and dialogue. The reader is expertly led into the minds of both Potter and Malfoy which allows the plot to play out with a massive depth, and the reader is soon immersed in the story. Secondary characters are well fleshed out and also \"feel\" realistic and the appearance of other protagonists always serves the passage of the plot well - they do not hinder proceedings in any way. The writer shows great skill in communicating thelinelings of the characters and the dramatic nature of the plot is equally well served by her ability to use humour at the proper moment in a manner that does not seem forced and is also realistic.
The writer demonstrates great ability in the usage of her plot devices, most notably the use of the Book - to say more would, I feel spoil the story - and the almost Romeo and Julietesque relationship between the houses of Gryffindor and Slytherin, both of which are well-integrated into the story. Indeed, little if any of the work feels as if it is present as an afterthought and this either shows meticulous planning or an exceedingly vivid and complex imagination. Whether intentional or not, this is clearly an evolution and expansion of the themes contained within Firelight by the same author, and it is a demonstration of her skill and emotional fortitude that she was able to delve so deeply and so widely into the themes of that story to create this work. It is my contention that this is one the premier pieces of creative reinterpretation of the Harry Potter series by one of the better writers of the genre, so much so that it stands head and shoulders above thet. t.
The writer demonstrates great ability in the usage of her plot devices, most notably the use of the Book - to say more would, I feel spoil the story - and the almost Romeo and Julietesque relationship between the houses of Gryffindor and Slytherin, both of which are well-integrated into the story. Indeed, little if any of the work feels as if it is present as an afterthought and this either shows meticulous planning or an exceedingly vivid and complex imagination. Whether intentional or not, this is clearly an evolution and expansion of the themes contained within Firelight by the same author, and it is a demonstration of her skill and emotional fortitude that she was able to delve so deeply and so widely into the themes of that story to create this work. It is my contention that this is one the premier pieces of creative reinterpretation of the Harry Potter series by one of the better writers of the genre, so much so that it stands head and shoulders above thet. t.