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for Firelight

by Keshu

person Krista
schedule May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I wondered if maybe had had buggered up a bit with the \"Imperio\" curse in that Harry can over power it, but wow! That was hilarious!

*applaudes*
person VelvetBlood
schedule May 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
And once again, we\'re reminded why Harry was almost sorted into Slytherin. Sneaky bastard... ;) Very nice fic. I love H/D. You pulled it off nicely. Thanks for a good read.
person Takaro
schedule May 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh! cool! Should I have known that about Harry? ^_^ I loved the fic, such a naughty Draco, so mmmm...*drools*
person Helmione
schedule May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I was impressed that you kept up the descriptive, poetic quality even when it got on to the sex! Most people seem to forget about writing style when the characters drop their trousers...I loved the Bertie Botts joke! I guess it was a bit spoiled for me by already knowing the ending, but I still wd tod to the characters (no, not in *that* way...honestly...!) and I thought Draco\'s hormone-overloaded confusion was well done - obviously there but not overstated - you write sexual tension well. Anyway - I\'m off to read the erotic adventures! Helen x
person Lunadeath
schedule May 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this was brilliant! Good job!
person David
schedule May 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damn good fic, bloody descriptive, and somehow ammusing and arousing at the same time. Nice one :)
person Zarah
schedule May 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story was excellent, and your other story is just as good. You have a great writing style. I look forward to additional chapters and hopefully new stories.
person EB
schedule May 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awesome, i like this so much. especially the ending!!!
person Jon
schedule May 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awesome... Simply awesome. *salutes*
person matt
schedule May 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
the ending was TOTALLY GREAT.
10/10 would read again