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Wow, that was completely different from what I expected; however, it was very good!

You have an interesting sense of humor. That combined with the smut and angst is really unique! Poor Hermione; she\'s having a tough time, and Snape with his clear braces and short hair--eek!

I definitely want to read more.

--Tegan

I like what you did with Severus. Yummy. Procter and Gamble, huh? I can see it now - the new Lux line by Severus Snape! The company should use Snape as spokesman...they\'ll easily hypnotise the mass market with that soft, silky...voice. heh.

Noooo to Severus and Rachel! Fix that! Fix that! ;P

Well, this story just keeps getting more interesting...please let me know when you update, or just post a notice on WIKTT, I\'d like to keep up with your story.

Thanks for writing,

Ez

Oh, that was so lovely so far, what a set-up you\'ve got going! I can\'t wait to see what sort of trouble these characters are going to get into. And everything so wonderfully British. I\'ll definitely be checking back for more.

Excellent start so far. I look forward to seeing more of it!
Mandi

AprilGrey, this is a very cool story! I can\'t wait to see how Severus cope with mundane muggle life. Added to that, there is the tension that Hermione has living with the man she gave her virginity to. heh.

LOL! Poor Snapey, all alone in the muggle world in the clutches of an evil Gryffie who won\'t help him!
The first chapter was chilling though, noe see sex part but that muggles actually presume to prescribe the wizarding world how they should live. This is really nasty. Who do the muggles think they are, some american democracy-bringing liberation army? Duh. No offence to your story, it was really well written - otherwise it wouldn\'t provoke such an emotional reaction! I like this story very much, it\'s just so heart-rending to see Snape away from where he belongs. Please update soon!

I really liked this. At first I was confused as of why Snape and Hermione would decide to have sex... but you explained it. (not that I find the couple unlikely, but I didn\'t really get the context at first). Your writing style is very good, you are quite fluent, and don\'t have spelling mistakes (I didn\'t notice any). Keep up!

This is still terribly funny. I loved the line where he threatened to tell her parents and ask for her hand in marriage. Perfectly Snape! I can\'t wait for more. Side note: you miss haggis?! Ugh! To each their own, i suppose...

Wow.. Neat fic! Nice \'voice\' for Snape, and I think it\'s going to be awesome to see where you\'re going with this -- a magical world that has been revealed to the muggles? How neat! I really like the idea. The only complaint I have would be the shortness of the chapter... :) Again, great idea!

Keep Writing!