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OMG!!! *squeals loudly* that was GRRRRREAT!

My love is Severus SnaWhatWhat i want is not ornate
I find him so gorgey
Let us not orgy...
AT GODS GIFT FOR WOMEN!


actually...that wouldnt really work for a limerick would it?

well.....
going on to ur next fic
Hoping i wont get sick
from all of my giggles
Cuz my mouth just wiggles
at the thought of Snapes.....er...lets not go there *wink*
lol u rock!
~kris

LOL ! I just loved the ending the of that chapter. Can\'t wait for the next chapter.

Oh, if I could only SEE the looks on Herm, Sev and Harry\'s faces at the end of that chapter! Hermione? Harry? Potter? Snape? It\'s too priceless!!! Wonderful job, keep it up!!!

I\'m a little worried that this fic is going to get very dark. I hope Hermione\'s statement about the threat of Snape being hauled off because of his Dark Mark wasn\'t foreshadowing.

I loved Harry\'s entrance! The balance you have created with the angst and humor makes for an excellent fic. My emotions seem to bounce all over the place.

--Tegan

Oou sou suck! I can\'t believe you did that! Well, at least it wasn\'t her Dad who walked in. I\'m stuck somewhere between complete outrage and laughter! Anyway, I\'m just kidding(mostly) and am still really enjoying this story. Please update soon!

Good job I like the sex thing..

That was an unexpected twist in the story. *raises eyebrows*

The pacing and the interactions made a sudden about turn; also, Severus\' \"confessions\" were spilled out in a rather abrupt-unexplained manner. Was it caused by the hex he received? Or the pain? All that seem to happen was that he was in pain, he closed his eyes and then started speaking as if he were back in Hogwarts. Perhaps this portion could be better formulated. However, I must say that that bit of interaction between them propelled the story into a wholly different plane.

Don\'t worry about Rachel though - I\'m not naive to think that our dear Professor would not take comfort were it offered to him. Although I must say that the whole experience with Rachel was quite sad in a funny way. heh. Compared to his coupling with Hermione in chapter 1, this affair with Rachel was pretty pathetic - lol at the allusion to scarlet women, the condom experience (and the going soft comment) and Rachel immediately falling asleep after ogasm.

What about Potter? Is he still somewhere in the background of this story?

Cool chapter, despite rachel. At least he learned better. I can\'t wait for more!

This is still a very depressing story. Have you read a story by Sushi called Flight? That one, too, dealt with muggles putting an end to the wizardinrld,rld, their culture and their way of life. But at least there were many who did not give up. Severus never gave up. I\'m totally devastated to see your Severryinrying so hard to fit in.

I\'ve been a bit behind in my reading here lately. These last two chapters were great! i love how well Snape has adjusted to the muggle world, wereas it seems poor Hermione is having a bit of trouble. Please keep writing- i love this story!