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for When the Magic's Gone

by Avrild

person GeekGirl
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW...that was an awesome ending....i loved your story and I can\'t wait to read your next project....your Hermione was sweet, kind and flawed....just like most girls her age....and your Snape was also interesting...i often wondered if maybe he was some kind of an addict with all those potions...thank you for a wonderful story.
person Red Writing Hood
schedule June 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh no you dont...you get those two together or...or...I\'ll boycoll ALL your stories...grrrr...LOL...seriously..great story so far. I look forward to the rest

RWH
person GeekGirl
schedule June 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow...i wan\'t expecting it to work.....I am anxious to see how this story ends....its very good.
person Jean Lamb
schedule June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More! I adored the bit where Hermione said, \'Here\'s MY lucky wand!\' and grabbed for the goodies. My kind of witch!
person Tegan
schedule June 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This latest chapter was my favorite, so far. The parallels with the Holocaust were really well done. There was a lot of feeling in Snape\'s words; they werry rry realistic.

You\'ve left me with a lot to think about.

--Tegan
person trachyte
schedule June 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like this! Good job. Can\'t wait to see what happens next.
person MoD
schedule June 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AAAHHHH It is getting so tense for me waiting! When and is Harry going to get with Annie before they go back? Can we get two chapters next time? Please!!!!!!! This is so great and it is just flowing so well i love this story!
person MoD
schedule June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay I have been hanging in for this unsual story. It started interesting and you keep me hanging on every word for more. Don\'t change nothing, dont take no suggestions. Just do your thing. I am really enjoying this.
person Jean Lamb
schedule June 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter, though sadly lacking in Vitamin C. But you have to put the Necessary Exposition _some_where, I suppose, and you did a fairly painless job of feeding us the info. (and I feel the same way you do about Trelawney. Fruitbat is about right!).

person Giova
schedule May 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay, i forgive you for the last chapter! This is a really great story, and I am looking forward to the rest of it. Hopefully future chapters will make up for the outrage of the last one;-). Forgive me if i don\'t review for awhile, I am in the process of moving and may not have internet for a bit(the Horror!). But I will be looking forward to catching up with this later.