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for When the Magic's Gone

by Avrild

person hila
schedule June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi
i really love your story. it is absoluty briliant. the heandkerchief issue was very sexy, and you actually make snape going to the dentist. i\'m on chapter 3 now so i\'ll read the rest of this wonderful story and review later. :-)
person y Riy Riddle
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it, I like it! It\'s a good story.
person Adrienne
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really good, plus good ending.
person Jeanine123
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! That was great. Absolutely loved it. You\'re an awesome author.
person spaz141
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t remember if I\'ve read this before. I was looking for something completed to read, I loved it canon or not, it was great fun. Thanks. I\'m going to read some more of your stories.
person Midnight Tiger
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my....that was wonderful...and so sweet! i wish i could find a guy who would treat me good and ask my mom for permission to marry me. LOL (though i could do without the whole dungeon sex scene....until later that is. ::wink wink::)
i really enjoyed \'mat the bat\' and harry\'s part in the story. wished you would have shown fred ged george alive and maybe a bit more of the others but i truly loved the \'doomes day clock\' and well...the entire story. :)
thanks for posting!
person chibidaima
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story was really fantastic. And it was original... I loved it!!!
person innerfeline
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just started re-reading this story after your latest chapter of \"Mirror, Mirror\" (which I\'m also really enjoying). I don\'t think this was finished when I read it the first time, and I never reviewed, but I found it really entertaining and memorable. Once again, that sudden leap from the drama to the rescue to the \"Can I call you Russ?\" line choked a chuckle out of me! I can\'t wait to get into this story all over again! :)
person fervesco
schedule September 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was bloody brilliant! I can\'t belive I haven\'t read this before. Such an original plot and I love the way you portrayed Hermione and Snape\'s characters. I\'ve just read the entire thing from start to finish and I must say that I can no longer see anything more than a foot away, but it was sooo worth it!
person GrrArrg
schedule July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was excellant!
That\'s the most original idea I\'ve seen on this site for a good long while. I liked your Snape very much, especially living as a muggle, and not being able to make coffee!! I also liked the idea of Hermione having tempers when she was younger and everything shattering around her, very Carrie!!!
Thanks for a really great story.
GrrArrg