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May 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very well written, beautiful imagery, Please continue!
Fellow readers please go read & review Loyalties so she will be encouraged to continue that story as well.
Fellow readers please go read & review Loyalties so she will be encouraged to continue that story as well.
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May 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is beautifully written, I really like it, and as i said before I don\'t really get into the malfoys, so that is saying something. I\'m interested to see where this is going- there is more, is there not? Please continue soon!
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May 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have rarely seen such grace in writing. The story is beautiful and skillful and the metaphors are breathtaking. Have you published this elsewhere? Not to disparage this site (i use it and love it) but it does not get the traffic of readers as other HP sites to to the NC-17 rating. I think you should publish it on other sites also. It needs to be out there for others to appreciate.
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May 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very interested to see where this will go, PLEASE continue.
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May 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
Just a short note to tell you I love this story. And the Miltonian framework is brilliant.
Can\'t wait to see more.
Just a short note to tell you I love this story. And the Miltonian framework is brilliant.
Can\'t wait to see more.
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May 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is really good! I\'m not actually a Malfoy fan, but this story has got me hooked. It\'s very well-written and descriptive, and I can see everything as you describe it. I hope you update this soon!
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May 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t usually read fic with orginal characters, but my goodness I am so glad I read this one! Its so beautiful. I can\'t wait for the next chapter. ^__~
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May 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is beautiful, you paint quite an interesting picture. Please continue!
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May 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
a beautiful quotation from the Paradise Lost...one of my favorite classics
angels, ethereally beautiful, huh? even the fallen ones.
what a perfect allegory for the Malfoys, deadly yes, yet fascinating folks, who float above the rest of the world though they might have been to the lowest pit and come out alive then risen even higher than before...
btw, who\'s this girl?
eh, not that parkinson girl, hmm?..
angels, ethereally beautiful, huh? even the fallen ones.
what a perfect allegory for the Malfoys, deadly yes, yet fascinating folks, who float above the rest of the world though they might have been to the lowest pit and come out alive then risen even higher than before...
btw, who\'s this girl?
eh, not that parkinson girl, hmm?..
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May 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is great. Keep it going....this fandom needs more fanfics featuring Lucious...er...I mean, Lucius Malfoy ;)