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quote from chapter 8: 'I accepted that Draco was now my brother, Narcissa my mother, and Draco [[should be Lucius, not Draco]] my father, though his kisses were anything but chaste.'
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quote from chapter 8: 'When my Lucifer steps up to wrap his arms around my waist, his hands splaying over my stomach in a protective gesture...'

Questions regarding the following portion, '...his hands splaying over my stomach in a protective gesture...,' of the above quote--is she pregnant with his child? If so, cool, even morally and ethically challenged people deserve to have carnal bliss that results in reproductive outcomes. ::wiggles eyebrows suggestively:: *SMIRK* *LEER* *WEG* ;~D

I love this story by the way. I especially enjoyed the development of the Serendipity character. As for Lucius, I've ALWAYS had the hots for him!

Keep up the good job of writing from the heart and enjoying what you do!

I haven\'t read anything this beatifully written in ages! Well done... You haven\'t happened to have read Angel of Ruin by Kim Wilkins have you? It goes along the same ideas and such as well.

I will treasure this story like the precious jewel that it is. Please continue to write! I would be glad to read more of your work.

Congratulations! Your writing is gifted, \"bewitching the mind, ensnaring the senses.\" That rare event, \"suspension of disbelief,\" occurred as I was drawn into the tale, forgetting reality as the story pulled me into itself. I could have been a figure woven into a tapestry on the wall at House Malfoy; a portrait oe wae wall at Hogwarts; an embroidered eye on a pillow on Serendipity\'s bed, or a rune worn around her neck on a braided silken cord.
This is what all writers want, to draw the reader so far into the story that they leave their world and cross the borders into the Otherworld. You\'ve done it; please continue to do it.

Blessed be,
Dame Niamh

Amazing. If the characters didn\'t belong to J.K. Rowling, I would wonder why you even bothered to put it on this website. For if they weren\'t her characters, you could probably publish this. It would classify as a short story, but it would a damn well written one to say the least. Thank you for writing this masterpiece and putting it on this website for others to read.

Absolutely lovely. very sorry to see it end.

I must say this is the best Lucius fan fic I\'ve ever read.
All the others make him seem clumsy and ignorant, but this one is captivating.
Please email me if you have more.
Dav!

this story is sooo good
i cant wait for you to update, i love the whole angel thing, i never really read made up characters, but for once im glad i did!
can u please email me when u update with the address above?
love em

Beautiful story! Such evocative imagery and grace of characterization. Malfoy is beyond compare, Serendipity his perfect match. You are wonderfully talented. Your writing style is lyrical and beautifully descriptive without becoming trite or boring. Incredible work!

this is very beautifull and poetic- i love it! i hope I get to read more of your work in the future!