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for On the Job

by TheLadyFeylene

person sinophile
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
excellent portrayle of the pleasure and pain to be found in bondage. not meny can write it and maintane a belivable ballance between the two. tough this was still quite obviously fiction, the fact that lupin didnt come at the EXACT same time as malfoy was an exceelnt bow to realism and I look foward to reading more of your work.
person Hem hem
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heuuu very good...
person Jessica
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello, LadyoftheFay

*hem*.. my name\'s Jessica.. i am French and.. Oh pleaaaase!!!!!! you must excuse my pitiful English *...heuu * So,

I\'ve made a traduce on your texte... your story about Remus/Lucius (\"on the job\") and i was wonder if
person amarad
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hello lady !
well i had read your fic and adviced it to jessica, and well, what we\'d like to do is to put a translation of this wonderfully hot fic of yours on our msn group, if you agree of course. we\'d of course make people know you\'re the writer and make a special page for it!
we did love your writing, go on this way! ;)
amarad
person Jessica
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what e hot story!! that was very very... a don\'t know how can a say that on anglish but that was very cool!!!!
person Jenny-fer
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooo... Very nice... Very yummy indeed... ^.^ Never would have considered this pairing...
person R.C
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More More More!!!! r they goin to be lovers in the end? huh huh huh?
person Sabrina
schedule August 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damn! that was some good shit. Very insex or ultrawired sex. Lupin bound - now I\'d like to see that!
person Jessyka
schedule July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Cool
person Lupine
schedule May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this was a great fic, actually I like all your fics...please write a squeal to this, like when Lucius comes back for more!