schedule
July 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
MY GOD WOMAN...this is THE BEST story i have read yet. I am mesmirised. Your story has touched me and im not even finished yet. It is the most intiguing story i have come across, and you have captured moments so well. It would have been diffiult, maybe, to write about a main characters death, but you did it suprubly. (You know what i mean). I have been crying for three or four chapters now, and i must admit i am enjoying every second of it. I will review again at the end of the story, but this one isng png printed out so i can read it again and again. Thank you for writing it:P Its wonderful:)
Catherine
Catherine
schedule
June 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Really great story, and wonderfully written. Are you still continuing on with it? I have been glued to my seat for over a day reading it all, so I do hope you continue through to when Hermione and Severus have their child... I look forward to hopefully another chapter and or another amazing story from you!
schedule
June 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful story. I laughed, I cried, I couldn\'t stop reading it. You are a wonderful author.
Jen
Jen
schedule
June 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WONDERFUL!!! So well written! I\'ll definitely be on the lookout for more of your fanfics and the updates for this story! Keep up the AMAZING work! Love it!
schedule
May 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I really liked this. I just had a couple of comments that you might want to correct. The first is; in Chapter 5, you refer to Severus\' sister as Valeria, but in Chapter 14, she\'s called Viscera.
Secondly, you repeated several paragraphs from the end of Chapter 11, in the beginning of chapter 12.
Other than that, it\'s is definitely a great story. How about a sequel?
Secondly, you repeated several paragraphs from the end of Chapter 11, in the beginning of chapter 12.
Other than that, it\'s is definitely a great story. How about a sequel?
schedule
May 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am simply put, in love with this story! Words escape me.. for like two seconds I seriously thought Snape was her father and I think my heart stopped! Wow.. I can\'t wait to read more! MORE I SAY MORE! LOL, keep up the great work!
schedule
May 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I first found your story at the restricted section website, and you have no idea how dissapointed I was when it only went up through nine chapters! I was so happy to find it here and being updated. I love the story, please keep writing! I think my favorite part has to be the humor that you manage to subtly put in. Its hard to do that with Snape, so congrats!
~Alia :)
~Alia :)
schedule
May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please write more!!!!!!!!!!
schedule
May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story, read it all the way through today. Although when I started you only had 3 chapters posted, imagine my surprise when you updated so quickly causing me to get lost in it and not finishing up my own story.
Are you going to be adding to it or posting a sequal. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
BB
Demonic Angel
Are you going to be adding to it or posting a sequal. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
BB
Demonic Angel
schedule
May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story, read it all the way through today. Although when I started you only had 3 chapters posted, imagine my surprise when you updated so quickly causing me to get lost in it and not finishing up my own story.
Are you going to be adding to it or posting a sequal. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
BB
Demonic Angel
Are you going to be adding to it or posting a sequal. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
BB
Demonic Angel