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for Learning to Love a Veela

by razldazzl72

person yan
schedule June 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE your veela story and can\'t wait the squel you promissI faI fall in love with your story for the first time I read it. Loveitloveitloveit.....you\'re a great writer and not forget the plot is great too. I\'ve a reaquest for you....do you like fairy tale story? Would you write one a HP frairy tale story? The idea is : There is a bose dragon attacked a small kingdom with a fair prince (I hope you choose Harry), an errant knight Draco called upon to help banissed the dragon but the king refused to pay Draco\'s price.....He wants the most precious in the kingdom the prince. No one Know the dragon is Draco\'s pet. Please make it like a normal Harry, with overprotective parents and friends and powerfull posessive Draco. Thanks
person Christine C
schedule June 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A delightful story, dear.

I love OverProtective!Draco-- he\'s so cute!

Anyway, goos story, good writing, can\'t wait for the sequel!

^_^

Slainte!
person Takaro
schedule June 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*cheers* YES YES YES! SWEETNESS!!!! I\'ve waited two weeks for that! *internet went down last week* I LOVED IT! SO DAMNED MUCH! YES YES YES!!!! *dances around*
person Turtle
schedule June 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Minnie

I an\'t remember if I reviewed you yet. But I just thought I would say that you are a great writer and I can\'t wait until the sequal.

Turtle
person jordan
schedule June 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! If you need a break that is okay! Just as long as eventually you will write more!!!!!!! ^_~ I can\'t wait to see if the baby is girl or boy!
person wintermoon
schedule June 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It\'s wonderful. Happy, happy birthday and all that stuff. I\'m SOOOOO glad I decided to look for this again. I had read teh first 7-8 chapters a long time ago and then sort of forgot about it. Please don\'t hate me, I didn\'t mean to forget. I loved it, really! I will be looking forward to the sequel, though I completely understand the need for a break.
person arcee
schedule June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Your a tease but the next chapter I hope is Sexalishus (can\'t spell)
person Turtle
schedule June 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You stopped just when it was getting good. Well I guess I will jut have to wait until Friday. That seems so long away for me. Great fic, can\'t wait until the next chapter. Not much else to say except you are an awesomely talented writer.

Turtle
person Myk
schedule June 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi. Lovely chapter. I have nothing to say though, so I won\'t take up your time with my mindless ramblings.

Myk
person Anon
schedule June 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you do know that NC-17 is allowed on this site so if you post the bonding scene with the actual sex part described as longas you bump it up to NC-17 you won\'t get it banned. Just thought that it would be easier to do that instead of having everyone going to another site especially if its a yahoo one because then you have to be a member to read it.