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March 4, 2023 at 12:00 AM
I read the sex part, but I didn't think that was on a very large scale. It probably still falls into the category of an appetizer for me.
It was very good though.
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi.
This fic is very sweet and is a nice change from the more aggressive veela fics however, you do need to keep your fics before posting just because there are quite a few simple mistakes which could be due to the fic being posted as they are there missed letters or repeats. Well done this fic is good for a light, good natured fic. The characters are all well written and reacting how I would expect from the books.
This fic is very sweet and is a nice change from the more aggressive veela fics however, you do need to keep your fics before posting just because there are quite a few simple mistakes which could be due to the fic being posted as they are there missed letters or repeats. Well done this fic is good for a light, good natured fic. The characters are all well written and reacting how I would expect from the books.
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May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story masterfully done
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December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE YOUR STORY it's so brill carry on with the good work =] soz 4 bein a little insane by da way
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hello
i'd just like to say that while i like this story and feel the overall plot is quite good, the writing style leaves a bit to be desired. Please don't take offence from that but i just feel (especially in the first chapter) that things moved too fast and didn't quite capture the essence of the story... for instance, harry and draco were a bit out of character with how fast they went onto a first-name basis... I'm sure the rest of the story improved however, unfortunately, I will not be reading it... I suggest a bit of editing is to be done before more people can successfully enjoy this story... again, I mean no offense, I'm just trying to help for your future writing... Good ideas though
Stef
i'd just like to say that while i like this story and feel the overall plot is quite good, the writing style leaves a bit to be desired. Please don't take offence from that but i just feel (especially in the first chapter) that things moved too fast and didn't quite capture the essence of the story... for instance, harry and draco were a bit out of character with how fast they went onto a first-name basis... I'm sure the rest of the story improved however, unfortunately, I will not be reading it... I suggest a bit of editing is to be done before more people can successfully enjoy this story... again, I mean no offense, I'm just trying to help for your future writing... Good ideas though
Stef
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just found this one in someone else\'s recommended list. It was great! I\'m so glad you already started a sequal. Thanks.
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sorry bout that. cool story loved it.
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the pseudodragon reminds me of \'\'muchu\'\' (sp?) in Mulan .... :D
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hallo. I\'m having a bit of a hard time reading your story, not because of your prose,
but because of the formatting. Would you mind terribly reformatting this?
Or, could I talk you into e-mailing me the complete story? Many thanks.
but because of the formatting. Would you mind terribly reformatting this?
Or, could I talk you into e-mailing me the complete story? Many thanks.
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January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I\'m in the midst of reading your \'Learning to Love a Veela\' and I\'m loving it, but at the same time, there is some things that I think is a bit....off... I in the first chapters A/N you say you have/had no beta, I was wondering if you\'d like one now?
Love//Helena
I\'m in the midst of reading your \'Learning to Love a Veela\' and I\'m loving it, but at the same time, there is some things that I think is a bit....off... I in the first chapters A/N you say you have/had no beta, I was wondering if you\'d like one now?
Love//Helena