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for Hermione\'s Story

by catfish

person Sadie
schedule September 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love the story first time i have read it. I hope you update soon.
person Gilthoniel
schedule June 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hello there!! I love this story. I hope your hand gets better and gets better soon. you are a very good writer. please write more soon when your hand gets better and i\'m sorry that you hurt your hand. lovely writing. well bye for now. Gilthoniel
person MG
schedule June 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Your story is great! And you\'re very imaginative, but check the spelling and use of words \'there\' is used for a place, and \'their\' is used to indicate possession, \'they\'re\' is simply they are, I like the plot and I can already see all the zombie death eaters, AHHH!! Well anyway I also like way way that you are developing the intertwined plots, first starting out with Draco and Hermione\'s feeling for each other and only after we get the idea for the main plot do you introduce the crazed shceme of lord Voldemort and his lackies, who I honestly believe to be Crabbe and Goyle, keep writting I\'m sure I\'m not the only one here who wants more of the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sorry, I over react some times, opps, did I make that hole in the wall?????????:)
person Shiny Chick
schedule May 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I really hope you update soon! God I sound corny... *blah* lol...Really like the story! More updatiness please?
person Petra
schedule May 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have really enjoyed your story so far. I can\'t wait to see what happens now in Hogwarts. I like the idea of Draco and Sirius as father and son.
You showed a other side of Ron. I think it is a bit harsh, but with his temper it\'s realistic. Keep up the good work. Please, please, please write more.
person liz
schedule May 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
fantabulous
person Azkaban_convict_202
schedule May 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe! good job PAprika! Luv you lotz! too bad you didn\'t torture Megs. It\'s so incredably funny.LOL.(L) you lotz. Tips!
person Azkaban_convict_202
schedule May 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey!!! Endless Historical Romances eh!!!! Well!!!!! Any way update right now!!! HEHEHE> good job you must have tortured Megs at least 3 times in the last 5 cahpters!! You\'re good.Luv you lots. Update soon. Luv Tips
person SchuylerD
schedule May 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow Steph said the exact same thing as a review to one of my fics. I have yet to find out what it means! Obviously she says it to everyone. (??)
person Dem
schedule May 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooooooh.... cursy...