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by Malfoywhore

person Jamie
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This is one of the most delicious stories I've read in quite awhile!!! It's extremely well done, good canon on the personalities of your characters, with enough sex thrown in to keep it hot, and enough humor to keep the reader from having a heart attack from too many consecutive orgasms in a single read. I absolutely loved ... "Mr. Malfoy, if you've finished with your pornographic finger theater, I believe we should start class," Professor Snape intoned ... few things I read actually make me laugh out loud, and that did. I also really loved the idea of giving us alternate endings, one where Hermione ultimately chooses Harry and one where she chooses Malfoy. My heart wants her with Harry, but your writing has caused me to crave Draco on Hermione's behalf as well. Please do write it both ways!!!! (And do it soon!!!!). Incidentally, my condolences on your recent wave of circumstances. I hope it won't seem insincere or sound hypocritical or sacreligious to say that I'll keep you in my prayers, but I am a somewhat religious person in spite of my obsession with reading/writing naughty fanfiction.
person Leona
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohmygod I just read your story and I love it love it love it! More! MORE! Give me MORE!

*deep breath* Okay, calming down... better. You are a singularly talented writer, and this particular story is fascinating. I love the way you manage to keep Draco and Hermione in-character throughout the whole. Most story-writers end up modifying their characters a bit too much, but this stays true-to-book enough that I can actually imagine it happening. And I laughed my arse off over the finger puppets.

Your portrayal of Draco is certainly...interesting...to imagine. Hmm. Yummy.

Please continue. I'll beg if I have to.

And I'm so very, very sorry about your kitty...I have one of my own.
person hedwigmail
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Story! I love it! Please update soon?
person Ravin
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"You know, Draco, you're very handsome."

"I know," he replied insolently.



I love your Draco. We all know Ron is mad, but he has yet to talk to Herm about it.I'd like to see that conversation. I have always secretly disliked Ginny, so this is great! I LOVE THIS STORY. I hope you update soon! Thanks for writing it.
person Fanoffanfiction
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this story so much. Then I looked at the dates to estimate future updates and realized this story has likely been abandoned and the fate of Hermione's virginity as of ch.10 will forever remain unknown =) Good writing though, and good story telling--if the authors reads this anymore.
person swiss miss
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THEY'RE GOING TO SHARE HER, AREN'T THEY??? omg! i can't wait!!!!! eeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
person Anon
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I starteed reading this story and I'm not anymore, but just before I turn out, have you ever read the scarlett lettter? She wasn't unfaithful. Her husband was lonf believed dead when she slept with another guy
person kurtcouper
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I so wish you would finish this or add a chapter. Will Hermione ever lose it to Draco or Harry?! AHHH the possibilites!
person Panther Eyes
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi, by the way good job. i think harry isnt emotionally stable to have any kind of relationship. n im hoping this will be a hermione/draco fic, cuz they go well together. please continue.
person Jo
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O my god i have never been in to harry but you have change my mind.