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by Malfoywhore

person esile
schedule May 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A) This is a well written, nicely plotted story. But that has been sad by better reviewers than I.

B) regarding your question in the chapter 5 (A/N 3): How about a third option? What about Hermione ending up with both Harry and Draco? Or do I really need to get my mind out of the gutter?


Again, I enjoy reading your fic. Continue what you are doing and keeps us in suspence as much as possible about the ending.
person yam
schedule May 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A work of art! It\'s quite rare, that talent of yours. I\'ve never seen a good story like that in a long time!
And trust me, I\'ve read a lot of HP fic. Please e-mail me when you update.
Thanks.
person HPfreak19
schedule May 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
e-mail me when you update, I like this story a lot. And to tell you the truth I really hope that Mione and Draco end up together, I don\'t know why, maybe sympathy for Draco.
person Michelle
schedule May 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, very very naughty....Well, Malfoy, the way you expertly described his gorgeous body, seemed very very VERY sexy! Wahoo! I love it, I love it, I love it! Actually, people should do more DM/HG fics, shouldn\'t they? Outstandingly done, girl...Please, feel free to write much MUCH more! (You describe those sexy boys all you want girl, cuz\' damn, they\'re fine!) (You are soooo my new best friend! Email me and we can talk more, k? Bye!)

The Volleyball Babe-ster

Michelle
person lyricallylily
schedule May 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a great story! I love the way you\'re writing the characters, keep up the good work. I think that the idea for two separate endings is great, too, :)
person MJ
schedule May 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ue upe update update!
person SunnyDay
schedule May 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! And she should definitely end up with Harry. But doing both endings would be fair to everyone but you, cause then you have to do more writing :) Or write the same thing and just change the names. **grins wickedly** Whatever you decide t do, I know it will rock! But when is Harry going to dump Ginny? Hmmmm? ANyway, great chapter once again...can\'t wait to read the next one.

~Sunny
person Jamie
schedule May 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think It\'s a good idea to have two endings...good story
person peregrinasr (Amber Roberts)
schedule May 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
When I started reading this I thought it was just going to be pointless smut, but it has proven to be well-written andhas has a good plot line. Great work! i love it. and good idea about the alternate ending...harry is fabulous, but who doesn\'t want to see the bad guy get the girl? and i agree, schuyler\'s draco IS a doll. keep it up!
amber
p.s. if anyone wants to read a draco story, check out mine (Twin Dragons). please read and respond...i\'ve had a hard time getting feedback! It is a Draco/OC fic.
person deedee
schedule May 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I was gone for a few days and u wrote so much. I love it!!! Ron is totally gonna kick Draco\'s and Harry\'s ass, isn\'t he? Please write more:)