rate_review Reviews

Oh, just make it a threesome and call it good enough huh? Give both of the boys some action.

Malfoy! Malfoy! Malfoy! Malfoy! Malfoy! Malfoy! Malfoy! Malfoy!

oh i love this story!! so cute and witty, =)

well as much as we all know how attractive our Go Boy Boy can be, it\'s time Hermione let herself be pampered and adored by someone who\'ll always place her in the first place, not as a replacement or a last thought.

And who better than the s*x god Malfoy to seduce and show her the rope?!
Once he opens his heart to \'Granger Miss Perfect\', he\'ll ensure, under his family name, she deserve only the best! X)

and yeah, Mr. Potter can\'t have everything in life, now can he?
He should have seen it and made his move long time ago...hmph

Just found your story today and read the first six chapters. As a rule I prefer slash fic but this is good enough to make me forget about that! You seem to do a really good job of staying true to the characters while allowing them to grow beyond what they were in the book (since they are so much older in your story.)

The only thing I could suggest as improvement are little picky technicaingsings like some spelling typos, uses of \"your\" when you mean \"you\'re\", that sort of thing. You have an awful lot of talent, though, so when you\'re a famous writer you\'ll have an editor for stuff like that:)

I\'m positively DYING to see how you\'re going to end it. I can\'t decide if I want Hermione to choose Harry or Draco, honestly! More soon, please!

Aranel

I forgot to ask--would you mind telling me some stuff aboou, ou, like how old you are and how long you\'ve been writing?

Ohhh! I like this little story quiet a lot!! I hope you update soon, because she has GOT to sleep with Draco - Harry is being a bit of a prat - what with having a girlfirend and all *grin*

Great start!

Karena Elizabeth

I really like this! Hermione should end up with Draco. LOL Seriously, thought, this is a good story, better-written than a lot of others I\'ve read. Please update soon!

If I count I want the Harry ending. Good story

You\'ve broken my heart; I was going to offer to be your beta! *pout* Just as well, I suppose... I\'ve got a lot on my plate as it is. But you\'d damn well better keep the updates coming.

Oh, and in my opinion two endings would be a great idea. After all, that\'s what fanfiction is all about, right? New versions of old favorites, and alternate versions of unended versions that version off into versiondom...

Lost the reviews?! Oh well then we just got to get them back up then bebe! I am really loving this story. Oh what a tangled web is being woven! *Grins deliciously* Well written, good story! U kick ass!