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May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Cool! Dreamcatchers, I wonder what Hermione is dreaming of?! Or is it *who* she\'s dreaming of!? Making out in class, while the rest of them are incapacitated...excellent! And Draco\'s \"love room\"...you described it exactly how I pictured it :) Very sexy and senuous.
Can\'t wait to read more!!
~Sunny
Can\'t wait to read more!!
~Sunny
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May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You definitely should not give two alternate endings to this story- it would only ruin the integrity of it. It\'s obvious she has to choose Harryfortfortunately, the way the story is playing out. However, it would be ok if she slept with Malfoy or some thing (after a fight with Harry)- since Harry has already slept with three people.
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May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
more... me want more
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May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Update now!
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May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Dude, I LOVE this story!! It\'s great! I love the little triangle thingy...but I dont want Harry with Hermione, I want Hermione with Draco! Lol! And when are they finally gonna get to it? hehe! It\'s a really great story. I noticed that in some chapters you separate the paragraphs with double spaces and in some you dont, and it\'s just easier to read when you do, so could you doublespace the paragraphs? thanks! lol! Anywho, I cant wait for the next chapter!
~Katie~
~Katie~
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May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It\'s okay. Take you up on that Malfoy offer, though.
On a totally unrelated topic, I think I may soon succeed in recruiting a friend into the addictive world of fanfiction. *just wanted everyone in the whole damn world to know* Muahahahaha... add one to the count of lost souls...
On a totally unrelated topic, I think I may soon succeed in recruiting a friend into the addictive world of fanfiction. *just wanted everyone in the whole damn world to know* Muahahahaha... add one to the count of lost souls...
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May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this!!! write more! and the interp of draco\'s characyou you have created is fabulous. =) keep it up.
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May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t see why she has to \"choose\" at all...she should have some fun with both! SCrew Ginny and Ron. They should hook up with each other and save us troutrouble of using them as plot device.
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May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
can you please please put Draco with Herm, since Harry doesn\'t deserve her? or better yet, put the 3 of them together!
yeah, have them fight over her and then end up in bed together. and her walking in on them or something.. and Ginny is irritating.
yeah, have them fight over her and then end up in bed together. and her walking in on them or something.. and Ginny is irritating.
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May 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have to agree with two of your reviewers you should really do one where she gets both boys (personally I think there\'s too many stories where it\'s the boy who gets the girl, it\'s the girl\'s turn to get what she wants darn it!). Very well written story, I very much like your concept. All of your characters are not only well thought out and written but entirely beliveable. I also like the idea of a \'Mile High Club\' on broomstick.