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Whoa, whoa, whoa. Let\'s not get out of control here. Faulkner, Joyce, and e.e. cummings together compose the Holy Trinity of literature. I will hear no slights against them, any more than I would allow someone to disparage Tolkien or Rowling.

And your beta is slipping. Conk Schuyler over the head for me.

Otherwise, I am VERY pleased with the goings-on of this chapter. I actually fell off my seat laughing when Snape caught Draco and Hermione the second time. And is there going to be slash in this fic? -- I can\'t remember what was written about Hermione\'s dream before this chapter, so if I\'ve got the wrong idea I must apologize. Will definitely go back to check after I post this.

I see the long wait was worth it! So far, I think that this is one of your best chapters; it certainly is one of the funniest. I love the way Snape catches them; but I can\'t help feeling sorry for Draco.

I love the way Draco\'s so in character, which is a good reflection of your work, since so many write him OOC. But I can\'t help wondering, Harry has the Maurauder\'s map, doesn\'t he? What if he sees Hermione and Draco in the same room? Maybe another fight? I love the way you write anghst.

Sorry got carried away there... I feel sorry for Ron though... By the way, This chapter provided better insights to the feelings of all cha characters, loved that.

Upload soon! I can\'t wait to know what Hermione dreamed. Oh and I\'m so Sorry to hear about your Grandad and your cat as well, and your car... I hope you thruthru your csae of writer\'s block.

Josh

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woo-hoo! way to go, and i\'m waiting for the next chapter. you know, i REALLY with that the REAL harry potter books were going on this way. it would make them much more...um, well, eh-heh. *wink* anyway, that was a great idea with the ice cream; maybe i should try it myself.

Ok One thing draco can not end up with ginny i hate those Draco/ginny stories!! but i loved this chap, damn Snape!!!

As great as always cant wait for the next chapter :)

V.Loffy, i can\'t wait to read more, sadly i have just stumbled upon this wonderful site and i am sorry to say i wasn\'t a fan of yours until :) :) Draco/Hermione was my first het ship and it\'s always fun to come back to it. You\'ve justified so far that the ends justify the means and how you\'ve done it, it\'s incredibly sexy.

Damn it I hit the wrong button. Anyway I think she enjoys her encounters with Draco more. She lets him go furter with her thats for sure. I just love this story please keep up the great work. Ernie

man, i absolutely love this fic. i just get so enthralled andaptuaptured. and the fic just keeps getting better and better. the pornographic finger theatre was hilarious and snape seriously rocked in this chapter. i absolutely adoredry mry minute he was on and he was just so magnificient at the end and so sweet. ahhh, but i so do hope she ends up with malfoy not potter (hey you promised me man in the wee begining so i have my faith in you) and that she doesnt lose her viginity to harry like i fear. and man it s to to be ron. but yeah harry just needs to get bitch-slapped. please, please write more soon. thanks.

oh. i forgot to mention granger\'s dream bead. i so do hope we get to see harry experience it in the next chapter cause i really want to see it.