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February 22, 2018 at 12:00 AM
It was really interesting for a while, but at this point I feel it's gone on too long without a payoff. Complications everywhere and no resolution in sight. I can live with either Dramione or Harmione (though I'd prefer the latter in this case), but neither one is really happening and I'm worn out. This was fun but I must bid the story farewell.
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February 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh wow... oh freakin' wow... this story is hot enough to melt my desk... and the floor under it. I had started this before but didn't get very far (the typos were kinda' distracting)... but tonight I read the whole thing and all I can say is whooo hoooo you got some hot muses!
I luuuuvvv this! I've always liked to read stories where there is a lot of sexy teasing to them... and Draco is the MASTER of teasing in this. I have to admit that right now I don't want Harry unhappy because I love Harry of course... but I'm rooting for Draco right now. I don't think he realizes it yet... but he's falling for Hermione and the way he treats her is the way every girl wants to be treated. Teased, desired, touched and wanting to spend time together. Harry seems to have tunnel vision but Draco is intensly focused and their scenes are majorly erotic. If Draco finally figures it out for himself I think he'll do anything for Hermione. I find myself wondering how Hermione could look at anyone else other than Draco.
And as for the MANY other scenes that stand out... oh my gosh... I laughed myself silly at Harry's dream! His image of Draco and Hermione's comments about it were freakin' hilarious. And I have to say... Draco's finger pantomime and Snape's comments in class and when he caught them were a riot too.
Hope you write more soon because this story is a total gem.:)
I luuuuvvv this! I've always liked to read stories where there is a lot of sexy teasing to them... and Draco is the MASTER of teasing in this. I have to admit that right now I don't want Harry unhappy because I love Harry of course... but I'm rooting for Draco right now. I don't think he realizes it yet... but he's falling for Hermione and the way he treats her is the way every girl wants to be treated. Teased, desired, touched and wanting to spend time together. Harry seems to have tunnel vision but Draco is intensly focused and their scenes are majorly erotic. If Draco finally figures it out for himself I think he'll do anything for Hermione. I find myself wondering how Hermione could look at anyone else other than Draco.
And as for the MANY other scenes that stand out... oh my gosh... I laughed myself silly at Harry's dream! His image of Draco and Hermione's comments about it were freakin' hilarious. And I have to say... Draco's finger pantomime and Snape's comments in class and when he caught them were a riot too.
Hope you write more soon because this story is a total gem.:)
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August 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy. Hermione's really in for it huh? Being caught by Snape was nt exactly in Hermione or Draco's favor, I'm sure.
Hermione seems to be the center of this 'love-triangle'; she really needs to figure out who she wants more. The question that has stood for about 2-3 chapters is: Harry or Draco? Harry, having no idea what he really wants questions: Hermione or Ginny? I believe he's in over his head with that one. Draco, on the other hand, seems to know exactly what he wants: Hermione. As for Ginny, she's really just plain annoying and doesn't deserve neither Harry nor Draco(I'm bashing a little, I really don't like her). Ron is being a jealous idiot and needs to apologize to Harry, even with his familial pride at stake.
Having read this far, I can sufficiently summarize this: Hermione is in the middle and doesn't know who she wants more. Harry, having just broke up with Ginny, wants Hermione and will (supposedly) fight for her. Draco knows exactly what he wants, however with Ginny on his tail, is not exactly able to go for Hermione. Ginny is acting like a total slut and allowing her emotions to control her. Ron, well, lets just say that he needs to forgive Harry and Hermione and stop being the support pillar for Ginny.
That's my honest opinion on the whole situation. Dealing in couples, however, is a completely different story that I will tell at a later date.
I'm hoping to see the next chapter soon! My support goes out to Harry/Hermione and Draco/Hermione as seperate couples, but mostly for the three of them to be together in one relationship! Well....it is as they say.....'All's fair in love and war....' :D
Hermione seems to be the center of this 'love-triangle'; she really needs to figure out who she wants more. The question that has stood for about 2-3 chapters is: Harry or Draco? Harry, having no idea what he really wants questions: Hermione or Ginny? I believe he's in over his head with that one. Draco, on the other hand, seems to know exactly what he wants: Hermione. As for Ginny, she's really just plain annoying and doesn't deserve neither Harry nor Draco(I'm bashing a little, I really don't like her). Ron is being a jealous idiot and needs to apologize to Harry, even with his familial pride at stake.
Having read this far, I can sufficiently summarize this: Hermione is in the middle and doesn't know who she wants more. Harry, having just broke up with Ginny, wants Hermione and will (supposedly) fight for her. Draco knows exactly what he wants, however with Ginny on his tail, is not exactly able to go for Hermione. Ginny is acting like a total slut and allowing her emotions to control her. Ron, well, lets just say that he needs to forgive Harry and Hermione and stop being the support pillar for Ginny.
That's my honest opinion on the whole situation. Dealing in couples, however, is a completely different story that I will tell at a later date.
I'm hoping to see the next chapter soon! My support goes out to Harry/Hermione and Draco/Hermione as seperate couples, but mostly for the three of them to be together in one relationship! Well....it is as they say.....'All's fair in love and war....' :D
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September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm officially hooked. I started reading this on RestrictedSection.org but I searched google for it and someone had linked me here.
I love the malicious way you write Draco. I personally vote for Draco to win Hermione's heart. Of course, Harry's not without his merits, but I've always had a thing for the reformed (or not quite so reformed) bad boy types.
In the last few chapters I've noticed a few formatting/grammar errors, words will get cut off or merged together with letters missing and it makes it a little difficult to muddle through. I've had a similar thing happen to me, but that was because of the touch pad mouse on my laptop.
If you have a beta, or if you beta your own stuff, you should have them take a look at the last three chapters. For example, a line from chapter ten paragraph two: "Draco wanted everything to befectfect. She had to fall for him completely." Muddling through it I assumed it to be read "Draco wanted everything to be perfect. She had to fall for him completely." But it made reading the fic just that slight bit more difficult. So if you have a beta, have them take a second look.
Keep writing, I'm going to fave the fic so I can keep checking back for new chapters. I'm looking forward to Hermione's m
I love the malicious way you write Draco. I personally vote for Draco to win Hermione's heart. Of course, Harry's not without his merits, but I've always had a thing for the reformed (or not quite so reformed) bad boy types.
In the last few chapters I've noticed a few formatting/grammar errors, words will get cut off or merged together with letters missing and it makes it a little difficult to muddle through. I've had a similar thing happen to me, but that was because of the touch pad mouse on my laptop.
If you have a beta, or if you beta your own stuff, you should have them take a look at the last three chapters. For example, a line from chapter ten paragraph two: "Draco wanted everything to befectfect. She had to fall for him completely." Muddling through it I assumed it to be read "Draco wanted everything to be perfect. She had to fall for him completely." But it made reading the fic just that slight bit more difficult. So if you have a beta, have them take a second look.
Keep writing, I'm going to fave the fic so I can keep checking back for new chapters. I'm looking forward to Hermione's m
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February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Pokes the authoress* No more writer's block! Come back! I love this. Keep it up!
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November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow. I love this story! I love Harry and Draco!! I don't know what I would do if I was Hermione! It's a hard choice! Update soon!!
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May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw! no more?!
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it. I am a H/Hr shipper too but I am really loving this thing with draco, I have to say that you have converted me. You have made it into a flawless transition, it seems natural for him. I tried to go to your group page on yahoo but it didn't work. I will be checking for updates often, PLEASE PLEASE don't make me wait to long.
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November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
REVIEW! please! i know it's been more than 4 years! but i need to know what happens!!
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November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm new to the story but I am really enjoying it! I find it difficult in choosing who Hermione should choose. But no matter who she chooses she should at least have sex with both of them. I really loved the sex scene in the library!