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person Sophie Black
schedule May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Noooo !!!
The cloak ! And the photo album ! And his wand ! Aaaaarrrggg !
It\'s the first time I see that. I mean, the Dursleys abuse Harry quite often, si it wasn\'t a very big shock... But that they had burnt everything... It\'s weird, it\'s like, the... \'best\' thing that happened and I\'m shocked by this...
I really love the first chapter ! I don\'t know if we can review all chapters like in ff.net, but I guess I\'ll prpbably love them... You\'re a great writer, I adore Changing Ideals ^^. But I\'m gonna review this story in a near future if I have time ^^
I\'ll continue to read...
And since this fic isn\'t finish, I\'ll ask you to continue ^^

Sophie
person RemusLupin
schedule May 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
G sto story keep it up
person Anna-chan
schedule May 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooh. That is SO sad. Hell, I would probably die. I wouldn\'t be able to sing, read, anything! I\'m so sorry for Harry. *has been crying through almost all of the fic so far* I can\'t believe that that could happen to anyone...*sob*
person Lakoma
schedule May 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good story. I\'m glad that you decided to pick it up and continue it. I found myself crying right along with Draco when Harry started to talk about his abuse. I\'m looking forward to reading more.
person B Jean
schedule April 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I feelbad bad for Harry. But, please, \"little one\" is such an icky endearment. How about \"child\" or \"snakelet\"? Much more dignified and just as affectionate.
person v
schedule April 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
love? hate? not sure yet- I definately want to read more,and the first chapter is well written and powerful. I hope that you continue, and soon! i want to see what happens to the dursleys!
person S. Wing
schedule April 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
so potter is blind.....that would be interesting.....wonder how draco fits into all of this.....good start....looking forward to more.
person Snapdragongrrl
schedule April 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am really intrigued by this. I would like to read some back story, of course, as to how things came to be that bad. It was well written, and I can\'t wait to read more. I love Hurt/Comfort stories. And when something this terrible happens to someone who\'s supposed to be so strong, it makes it even more interesting to find out how he\'ll ever bounce back from this. Very cool seeing Protective!Snape, too.
person Sorena
schedule April 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yeah, i like it, it\'s a little scary at the beginning but it is great!!!
can\'t wait for the next chapter!
person Jenny
schedule April 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait for the next bit! Great stuff so far - keeps me wanting moreurt/urt/comfort stories are awesome, especially with HP/DM/SS! Write more soon pls!!!