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by Myk

person TKiwi
schedule August 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hmmm, not too sure about Sev always calling harry \"little one\" all the time, but other than that i like this MUCHO!
-Kiwi
person TKiwi
schedule August 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i like how this ios going, it\'s just that they\'re all so out of character it\'s a little hard to read at times! i\'m trying tho, dammit, I\'M TRYING! kudos to you and update soon!
-Kiwi
person Luna
schedule August 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am really injoying this story so far!!!ase ase update soon cause I want to see what happens at the trial!!!
person bagginsforever
schedule August 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think that your story really has potential. Just keep going like you did until now. I know, how difficult it is sometimes to write. I have a few ideas on my own, but I just can\'t sit down and write a story. So, I just keep reading fic over fic. That nice too, but a little frustrating, if the fics are not continued. I am sure I will become crazy, because of all the good stories without an ending. You have to help me! Just don\'t leave me like this! You are now responsible for my sanity! So good luck! I hope you the time and the Muse to keep on going! I simply say: Go Myk, go Myk, go Myk!
person Linis
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
My oh my a great story the only problem I have with it is the changing of Houses and the fact the Hermione and Ron and the rest of the gryffindors have not tried to introduce themselves to harry and tried to keep him away from the slytherins.. particularly Draco... Anyways great story and I cannot wait until it is updated....

LINIS
person Tali
schedule July 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like the story! It\'s nice to see the golden boy in a vrnabrnable position, though I always hate seeing Harry hurt. The portrayal of Draco is excellent, the slick kid who gets the second chance. Please keep writing!!
person jo
schedule July 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YOU BASTARD!!!!!! *breaks down into sobs* You killed her, you killed her.....my favorite.....my precious......(well, one of them) I\'m just gonna say this once for the record, and there had better be a correction next time you post bcuz BLAISE ZAMBINI IS A GIRL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *! *ahem* anyhoo, it\'s great otherwise, just keep writing (and don\'t forget, or I\'ll send you.....FRUITCAKES!!!!! MWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!)
-jo
person Shadowsword
schedule June 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! After this long time another chapter. Hope you
person Turtle
schedule June 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great job can\'t wait for more whenever your brain feels like telling oyu hands what to type.
person SKY
schedule June 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Happy to get a new chapter! I liked it so much I had to go re-read the rest of the chapters over again.