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May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
No wonder this rated nc-17. oh my godh i do not think I have ever read such a chair gripping description of that love making... *shivers* I give you props, my friend! very very good chapter!
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May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Muahahahahahaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sev and Harry have a plan, oh the suspense!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAYYYYYYYYYNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YUMMY Smutty scene!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:D
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May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Liked chap 27, but it was rather abrupt from 26 I think. I
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May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you did the sex scene very good, can\'t wait for the next chapter.
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May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi, i loved the chapter.
Loved the smut
However.
I do have a little thing to say, In the scene i thought Harry would have been upset/uncomfortble at being restrained. You know after the rape and such. Just an observation from a Psycology freak.
I loved it tho!! ^^ was all happy when i saw the title chapter
:-D
more soon?
yes??????
PLEASE?
I\'ll give you some mallowmars!!! ^^
Jane
Loved the smut
However.
I do have a little thing to say, In the scene i thought Harry would have been upset/uncomfortble at being restrained. You know after the rape and such. Just an observation from a Psycology freak.
I loved it tho!! ^^ was all happy when i saw the title chapter
:-D
more soon?
yes??????
PLEASE?
I\'ll give you some mallowmars!!! ^^
Jane
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May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*floors the hit*
Oh. My. God.
Such smut! Such briliant, beful ful smut! I loved it, you know, I really, really enjoyed reading it *meaningful look*. The thing is, when you write a smut scene, you want to know how good it is. But everyone is always too ashamed/shy to tell you how turned on they were. Well, you\'re hearing from me, you really had nothing to worry about about writing this kind of stuff. You are good (all innuedo intentional)
Anyway, the only reason I objected to the binding and spanking was coz Harry had been raped, so I thought he would freak. But yes, evil Harry!, and you explained it all quite nicely when he had his cute self loathing/doubt moment that Sev had to talk him down from. That was wonderfully done too, I feel quite moved *sniff*
Have decided that from now on whenever anyone wants to get their point across by saying *moans and melts*, they should instead just write *M&Ms*. This gets the point across much quicker and with leypinyping, which is important when melting.
*goes back to actively drooling*
Oh. My. God.
Such smut! Such briliant, beful ful smut! I loved it, you know, I really, really enjoyed reading it *meaningful look*. The thing is, when you write a smut scene, you want to know how good it is. But everyone is always too ashamed/shy to tell you how turned on they were. Well, you\'re hearing from me, you really had nothing to worry about about writing this kind of stuff. You are good (all innuedo intentional)
Anyway, the only reason I objected to the binding and spanking was coz Harry had been raped, so I thought he would freak. But yes, evil Harry!, and you explained it all quite nicely when he had his cute self loathing/doubt moment that Sev had to talk him down from. That was wonderfully done too, I feel quite moved *sniff*
Have decided that from now on whenever anyone wants to get their point across by saying *moans and melts*, they should instead just write *M&Ms*. This gets the point across much quicker and with leypinyping, which is important when melting.
*goes back to actively drooling*
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May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!! I so happy you updated!! I can\'t wait for more.. hehehe. I LOVE this ficcy.. hehehe, keep writin Babe, your doin great, and EXCELLENT!!! Job on the smut.. WOOO HOOOO.. GREAT JOB!! WONDERFUL, SUPERB!! all those other really big words that mean really great too.. hehehe. Til the next one babe!! ~~Minnie
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May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OK what was Snape\'s idea and what did they do to the old man?
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May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very much better. Your work is beginning to flow together be. St. Still a sight bit choppy when you change subject but much better.
When I first read this it did remind me a little of one of Diagonlist\'s stories.
I love Slythrin Harry, he is kick-ass and take-no-names. What did he do to evil Dumbledor?
When I first read this it did remind me a little of one of Diagonlist\'s stories.
I love Slythrin Harry, he is kick-ass and take-no-names. What did he do to evil Dumbledor?
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May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve just finished reading C I and let me say that your story is a very good one and I really like it a lot. I have seen a great improvement in your writing style as the story progressed. I am glad of that. when you started you had a great plot but wrote like you were unsure of just how to get your point across. In the middle to the last chapters your style and attention to the correct amount of detail and character personality has gotten so much better. I really like