schedule
April 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow!
This story is intense. Yes, the rape scene was graphic, but it would bee been dishonset to the world you\'ve set up for it to be anything else. I applaud you for sticking to your guns and keeping it as harsh as it was. Rape scenes are hard to write, at least for me, but sexualizing them or having them be anything but brutal just doesn\'t sit right with me.
It\'s a shame that you\'ve had to censor yourself on FanFiction.net, but that\'s to be expected there, I suppose. Thankfully, you\'ve found an archive where you can publish your story as you intended.
I wasn\'t sure what to make of Harry at the beginning of the story, but as it has progressed, I\'ve seen his motives and his reasoning develop more and more. You have kept me intrigued and interested all along. I can\'t wait to see what happens to those two bastards that hurt Harry like that, and I\'m enjoying seeing the evolving dynamic between Harry, Draco and Severus. Well done! Keep up the good work. :)
This story is intense. Yes, the rape scene was graphic, but it would bee been dishonset to the world you\'ve set up for it to be anything else. I applaud you for sticking to your guns and keeping it as harsh as it was. Rape scenes are hard to write, at least for me, but sexualizing them or having them be anything but brutal just doesn\'t sit right with me.
It\'s a shame that you\'ve had to censor yourself on FanFiction.net, but that\'s to be expected there, I suppose. Thankfully, you\'ve found an archive where you can publish your story as you intended.
I wasn\'t sure what to make of Harry at the beginning of the story, but as it has progressed, I\'ve seen his motives and his reasoning develop more and more. You have kept me intrigued and interested all along. I can\'t wait to see what happens to those two bastards that hurt Harry like that, and I\'m enjoying seeing the evolving dynamic between Harry, Draco and Severus. Well done! Keep up the good work. :)
schedule
April 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story
schedule
April 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aloha Myk,
Thanks for this lovely and quick chapter and I really like this story. The problem I\'ll be having now is that it is going to be slightly impossible to know when you update this story. Please continue and let me know when next you update.
Thanks for sharing,
Strength and Honour,
Atie
Thanks for this lovely and quick chapter and I really like this story. The problem I\'ll be having now is that it is going to be slightly impossible to know when you update this story. Please continue and let me know when next you update.
Thanks for sharing,
Strength and Honour,
Atie
schedule
April 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think the length of chapter 23 is fine, where you ended it works well.
Poor Harry, he\'s had to go through so much, and now this ordeal with Blaise and Dean *shudders* I\'m glad he opened up to Sev and Draco, something like tshoushould not be bottled up inside. Also, I love how caring Sev is for Harry... his caring side is one that is shown often in the majority of HPfics.
I\'ve gotta say, I never had planned on reading any HP/SS fics, and then after I started reading this one I was going to read any others... but thanks to you the pairing is starting to grow on me... maybe I\'ll go look and see what jelly-bean has posted.
Keep up the great work, don\'t let stupid people, like ff.net, deter you, I love this story and can\'t wait for the next instalment.
Poor Harry, he\'s had to go through so much, and now this ordeal with Blaise and Dean *shudders* I\'m glad he opened up to Sev and Draco, something like tshoushould not be bottled up inside. Also, I love how caring Sev is for Harry... his caring side is one that is shown often in the majority of HPfics.
I\'ve gotta say, I never had planned on reading any HP/SS fics, and then after I started reading this one I was going to read any others... but thanks to you the pairing is starting to grow on me... maybe I\'ll go look and see what jelly-bean has posted.
Keep up the great work, don\'t let stupid people, like ff.net, deter you, I love this story and can\'t wait for the next instalment.
schedule
April 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Really good please contenue
schedule
April 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
cliffhanger....aaakkkkkk bad author bad author......sigh...really though its good I just want more.....sigh...I am so needy...
schedule
April 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow that was intense.
not frightfully nasty though.
you think you can craw out of the corner now? promise we dt hat hate you.
next chapter please!
werewindle
not frightfully nasty though.
you think you can craw out of the corner now? promise we dt hat hate you.
next chapter please!
werewindle
schedule
April 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hurry up with the other chapters, i want to know what happens next
I LOVE YOUR STORY
sincerly yours,
Wanita
I LOVE YOUR STORY
sincerly yours,
Wanita
schedule
April 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
SURE!!!! Don\'t bother telling me your posting over here too now, I see how you are.. HA. hehehe, so it\'s gonna be NC-17 huh??? hehehe YEAH ME!!! thinking about going that way later with LLV.. hehehe. not for many many chpaters though. LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!! Can\'t wait for more *waggles eyebrows*
schedule
April 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
please continue!