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How will Dumbre ire inject more poison into Harry if he\'s not in the hospital wing? What baout the poison in his system?

Why did Harry survive the poison I love your story andk fok forward to the next chapter

yet another great chapter from you!!! I can\' wait for chapter 26.. that should be good.. hehehe, poor sevvie is clueless for once!!! Is he doing the bond thing cuz of the snake venom?? MWAHAHAHAHAHA Until the next!! ~~Minerva

hey i\'m sorry. I haven\'t been able to acces the web lately so now I\'d like to say dumbledore is a manipulative bastard and that i loe your story!

Update soon please I wanna know what will happen.

**sings**

Im a gonna climb up on mah faithful steeeeeed
Then Im gonna ride gonna smoke some Weeeeeeeed
Climb up on mah BIG ass steeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed
And gonna RIIIIIIIIDDDDDEEEEEEE

*.~

Okay, that some of the insanity out

Draco: Oh no its gonna b one of *those* reviews Jane isnt it?

Jane: **GRIN**

Draco: Yup....thats what i was afraid of...

Jane: Shhhhh **bats eyes at Malfoy**

Draco: Thanks!

Jane: No the *other* Malfoy

Lucius: Good day

Jane: **sighs in a dead faint**

Draco: QUICK RUN RUN RUN

*Lucius and Draco run and hide*

Jane wakes up and realizes she has to review properly yet....:

Jane: Awwww, poor harry, **hugs harry muse who looks confused** sniffle and that BASTARD BLAISE AND DEAN **sees she has no Dean muse so kiks violently her Blaise one who looks bemused**

Jane: Okay, loved it, now to find Lucius and Draco....... *goes away to get them get them* TBC

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA (Sev: Are you getting the *jay is gonna kik some ass soon* vibe?) AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AA AA A A AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA (Ater: Yeah....)

Jane: **fizzing** I\'LL FECKING FECKING DO DUMBLEDORE! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA (etc)

Jane: Oh i found Draco and Lucius, they was hiding in the alley... dumbasses...

Draco:Yeah.... we only had 10 seconds to run so shut up

Lucius: *shrugs*

Draco: Im hungry

Jane: Tough.

Draco: What u\'r gonna let me starve?

Jane: *unconcerend* thats about the size of it...

Draco *HUFF*

Jane: he he he he he, i\'ll feed him later, great chapter, can wait for more!

Excellent so far. You seem to have mastered the ability to determine when to be graphic and when not to. I would say you definately have the sense to tell when it adds to the story and when it detracts. The misuse of some words is a little distracting but over all this fic is excellent. Update soon.

I so did not exspect a evil Dumbledore but I like what you are doing . I also like Harry in Slythrin. WWrite more soon ....

well Dumbledore certinly is evil (and not in the good way). Can\'t wait for the next chap.