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for The Secret Diary of Severus Snape

by Mimine

person Anath
schedule August 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Have I told you how much I love this? So real, sensual and with a hint of darkness too - please keep writing! Your Lucius is just soooo luscious...

Love & Serpents\' Kisses,
Anath.
person Sabishisa
schedule August 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This has got to be the BEST SS/LM fic I\'ve ever read. *glomps you a million times over*
person Vertigo
schedule August 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
\"... All I could see was an old blackboard, a Desbourges Arithmancy calculation still on it. Some part of my brain was even trying to solve it.\"

Heh. That last line was priceless. No one should tell Lucius he didn\'t have Severus\' full attention. He\'s getting dangerously obsessive as it is, isn\'t he?

I am quite enjoying this even though I shouldn\'t be reading someone\'s private (very) diary. ~_^

P.S. I loved \"Side-Effects,\" too.
person Poisonous Love
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More? Is there More? Anything? Please!?
person Spring Storm
schedule May 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh my, so we finally get to see the hidden side of the Snape persona, the passionate, the almost-innocent, and the caring..
this is a real witty piece of writing, with a generous dose of fluff/smut and a usual share of angst, great job +)
poor Evan, ah the agony of unrequited affection, sniff..is Severus just going to pine after the Malfoy heir?

hmm, nice touch about Stefan Delacour, i assume that\'s somehow related to Fleur, huh? well, funny, this doesn\'t portray Lucius as a veela, i\'ve seen so many L/S ficout out it...

nyways, a real smashing piece, hope there\'re more to come!
person GMTH
schedule April 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really likes pis piece. I find it really interesting because you are portraying an isolated Snape in his years at Hogwarts without resorting to the cliche that no one likes him. Plenty of folks do and yet he\'s still alone because of Lucius\'s cold heart, and that works juerfeerfectly in this piece. Plue see sex is very hot - :-) - but it\'s also powerful because it adds to the overall feeling that even when Severus is closest to others he\'s still isolated. I\'m glad you posted in your LJ that you had updated and I hope you\'ll do that again next time. I don\'t want to miss any of this! :-)

Gina