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for The Secret Diary of Severus Snape

by Mimine

person Tsunami
schedule December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Severus. Things have been going downhill for him. But that probably describes most of his life.
person thecleric007
schedule December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOO!!!! Another update. This is just what I needed in the middle of exam week! Thanks!

I have to admit though now that I am really hoping for some Snape/Lupin action. I sense the possibility of some in the near future. Please, pretty please, with a chocolate-covered Snape on top?

Anyway, great update, I can\'t wait for the next one!
person YG
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I adore Snape ^^ And when will be Lucius back into the picture? ^_^
person Tsunami
schedule November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I was thrilled to get another installment of this fic. Thank you! Points for Severus that he had the sense to see that Lucius isn\'t good for him - especially with Stephan\'s influence. I get the impression Stephan isn\'t good for Lucius, but I don\'t know why Lucius lets Stephan abuse him. Avery was a real friend, attempting to defend Severus, rather than just using him for homework. Lucius had a lot of nerve with his accusations. He described himself a lot more accurately than he described Severus. I liked the fact that Lucius cried though, but I hate to think what Stephan whispered, and has been whispering, to him. Frankly, it\'s a wonder Lucius didn\'t drive off Sev earlier. I\'m tempted to speculate on why Severus sometimes gets the feeling he\'s being watched.
person thecleric007
schedule November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!!!!!!!!!! An update!!!!!!!! WOOHOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! *does a happy little dance* Can\'t wait for the next one!


The Cleric 007
person Anon
schedule September 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well well well! A true insight into the life and times of Teenage Snape, Whore of Slytherin! Delicious - and very very well written! I like it! And there should be more. I especially enjoy the way some naughtiness is glossed over but the important bits are described beautifully - and all in first person! And it even sounds like Snape! Delish. More?

- \'Da Kitten
person felonia
schedule August 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So... Lucius has cracked something very precious in Severus.
Where has gone the Lucius who said he wanted absolutely no one to touch his Sev ?
Is he just an amoral, capricious Sex God or foolishly self-denying teenage, who can be thought even more naive than Sev?
Anyway, intrigueing characterization of Lucius...

I was very delighted that you updated the fic somewhat fast this time. Can I expect it from the next entries?
And... of course I love your SS/LM, but I aslo want some progress between Severus and Evan *with* warm regards. Please?
person Black Goddess
schedule August 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE this fic! The mixture of really funny moments and really sexy, as well as really sad, means that it\'s always fresh and rather addictive (the bit with the jam at the breakfast table was disgusting, by the way! Other people have to eat that!) I\'d be very grateful if you\'d tell me when you next update this because I really am eager to fkeep reading.
Great job!
person Empress of the Eclipse
schedule August 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
person Empress of the Eclipse
schedule August 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*whimpers with rage* It\'s STOPPED! I don\'t want it to stop, this story is EXCELLENT. I haven\'t read anything this good for a while, it\'s honestly brillaint! The idea of a frog on suicide watch is one of the funniest things I\'ve read for a while, it\'s just a lovely idea. And the gargoyle in front of the students potions lab is hysterical. I love Lucius/Snape and you feel so sorry for them. It looks to me like Lucius has bitten off more than he can chew where Snape\'s concerned.

Anyway, I look forward to another chapter of this and can\'t wait to see it! Keep up the good work.