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for The Secret Diary of Severus Snape

by Mimine

person Mayhem
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hot damn! I\'ve just spent my evening reading this story from chapter 1 to 11, and now I sit here, whimpering, devastated that there are not 20 more chapters to follow! I loved every bit of it. I\'m amazed how you hit that tone of Severus as a 15 year old, or rather, I\'m completely in awe. I\'m also a hopeless romantic, so despite everything, I still hope that Severus will find some happiness, with whomever.

Thank you for sharing this extraodrinary story. :-D
person tubesox
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story and I hope you keep at it. It\'s wonderfully written and...and...well, this is why I don\'t review stories in general, but I wanted you to know thameonmeone is waiting for the next installment, hoping to see more of Remus, and praying that Severus is happy in one of the new entries.
person narcissa
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!
this is so great!!!
keep writeing!!!
person thecleric007
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me again. I finally remembered to check your fic (I wish that aff.net had author alerts like ff.net!). Woohoo, another update. And some interesting Remus/Severus developements. I have a question though...what year is this set in? I\'m sure it says somewhere, but I can\'t think of that now. I\'m just trying to figure out where the Shrieking Shack incident fits in the timeline.

Can\'t wait for the next update, as alw Yo You rock!


person YG
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I hope Remus liked it ^^ it would be nice for Sev to have a good looking lover to rub it in Lucius face... ^.^ so the blond would realice what he is missing and beg him to come back ^_~
person nesscafe
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aw, that was almost sad! I feel so bad for Remus. He really seemed to like Snape and all Severus could think about was revenge on Gryffindors! I hope that he gets another go w/ Lupin and does it right! And I hope that he gets over Lucius enough to enjoy Lupin a little.looklook forward to the next entry. This was the fic that got me to liking slash! You rock!
person The Cleric 007
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yayness! A new chapter! Woohoo!!! And more Lupin, always more. I\'m glad nasty Jigger is gone though...ick! More, more, MORE!!!!! Lol, I know I\'m a rabid yaoi fan girl!
person nesscafe
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOLY COW! I don\'t know why I\'m so fasinated by young horny Snape, but I can\'t help myself! Do you ever play to let him have a girl? Or is he strictly gay? Either way the more you write the more I can\'t help reading!
person rahela
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please, pleaseite ite more and give Sev and Lucius a happy ending. I know I\'m sappy, but please make Lucius love Snape. He really deserves it.
person felonia
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my dear! You DID update after only a month! bwhaha~
hwm.. as always your Sev\'s diary is so informative and I love the surroundings.
The teenagers are lustful but healthy and harmless, and your describing Sev\'s school society has become my *ideal* land where homo/hetero/bisexuals all live harmoniously. haha
And Avery is getting cuter and cuter to me(You know what I mean!). My fuckable prince only when flying on the Quiditch broom~! XD

Though, It haunted me a little that nowadays Seversus is too much like a... whore?
I assumed that he may mentally got hurt by that Lucius occasion.
But nontheless I just love Luci, and could I expect to see him more from the next entries?
He always has a sensuous, tempting araura in himself, which, more importantly, well matches your Sev\'s...