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for Don't Say A Word

by Hanakai

person saz
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is strangly nice. I can feel severus's hurt. It's wonderful. Thank You.
person Anonymous
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
person kerfect
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. just wow. it\'s so perfect i don\'t think i have the words to describe the perfection.
person Waywren Truesong
schedule November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Square the eighteen kinds of wrong, because I don\'t know what to wish for. Poor Severus. Poor Harry.

And damn them. Damn them both to Hell. Damn Tom Marvolo Riddle and Albus Dumbledore.
person WitchbladeHell
schedule August 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very deep, very poetic and dark. I love it. You\'ve been able to explain a part of Snape that may not even be his character, but should be because that is probably the way most people would feel if they had gone through the same thing...huh...Okay, you\'ve succeeded in giving him almost a human soul. Congats! I bow before you ;0)
Very nicely done.
person lupusdragon
schedule August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: Okay, Hush Little Baby was good, but this was...
LD: Fucking incredible.
Karen: Gods, I was crying by the end. It is so tragic in a depraved sort of way.
LD: I just love angst and psychological turmoil. This was DARK! Comepletely amazing.
Karen: Most definitely
person ladydeathfaerie
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
once again, i am left stunned and speechless. you are an artist. and i\'m a junkie!

i want some more!
person mikochef22
schedule June 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am actually in tears here, I kid you not, that was depravedul-rul-ripping, heart-pulverizing, simply Beautiful.
Thank You So Very Much ;)
person Sarryn
schedule June 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ah, wonde! Sa!
person Quoth the Raven
schedule April 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A gorgeously-written sequel that has every bit the impact that the original had. I love how Severus had been invaded by Harry even as he had invaded Harry; unable to get him out of his mind, no matter what. And the innocence of Harry now, as he goes about his normal daily routine, is all the more striking when Severus remembers how he had been that night. How unintentionally enticing Harry had been then, and is now. I love the line about Harry\'s mouth and sin.

Lovely. Just lovely.