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for Polaris

by MinakoAino

person n.B.
schedule April 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey, when the hell are you gonet tet the 2nd chapter ready?
i liked this, and i\'m simply dying ot know what\'s up next.
person CM
schedule December 17, -0001 at 12:00 AM
don\'t give up! You did a great job! ^_~ UPDATE! SOON!!!!!
person Amber
schedule December 17, -0001 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. Esp touching between Casey and Ryo. Almost cried at the end when Casey said goodbye and was alone. Probaly for the best since he should care for himself maybe a while, right? Either way this ine a very moving story. Loved every moment.
person E
schedule December 17, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Whee... where there\'s a will, there\'s a way. = D Good job, keep going, and the MMX fic definitely sounds good after reading that. ^_^
person Anatra
schedule December 17, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow....a highly impressive story, well written, well characterized, believable and almost likable OCs ( I have a thing for Sadists). Excellent work, you've devoted a substantial amount of time and thought into the plot and the developing training of our poor prince ;) I can't wait to see more of the kinky stuff that they plan on putting the elf through in order to 'tame and break' him. I'm not so sure I like the introduction of the female...it seems a bit too much like a good cop/bad cop scenario, where one lures him with nice treatment, which makes the bad things happening to him so much worse. Anyway..it's certainly not going to be a huge complaint as this is really well done and enjoyable!

Thanks so much, I really hope to see the next chapter soon!

~Anatra