rate_review Reviews

I luved this story-very very good:)
Two Thumbs up
4 stars and all that rot...
:D

Hi!

Nice story! I enjoyed reading it.

I\'ve got a question: Are you, by any chance, the author of \'A Ride To Remember\'?

\'cause I simply love this fic. I read it on Snitchfiction.net, and we all know how many problems that side has at the moment... If you are the one I was looking for, would you please post this great story here on adultfanfiction as well? I would sooo like to read it again, and maybe a few more chapters...

If you are not the author of A Ride To Remember, please don\'t be angry with me. But there were so many stories on snitchfiction I\'d like to see finished and I am frustrated that I can\'t find most of them any more.

Mogli

That was good, thanks. I would probably like a bit more detailed descriptions of the characters. How do they look, etc. They probably changed quite a bit after the Hogwarts times, so it is a bit difficult to visualise them.

I also didn\'t like the reference to popcorn and DVD in the beginning. It doesn\'t set the right mood, I think. Although both Potter and Hermione are quite familiar with Muggle world, they would probably eat some magic analogue of popcorn and have something better for entertainment than DVDs. And DVDs seem out of place, because there are no references to modern technology in the books.

wahoo! well done! hell yeah woman empowerment - refreshing read

I enjoyed this very much. Well written, pretty much IC characters, and just riding that very hard R/NC-17 line.

This is wicked! MORE SEX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

please keep up the good work! i love that couple!

Heh heh....great little story. Just the way I like my H/Hr...post-Hogwarts, after endless lines of casual relationships, finally coming together in one explosive BANG. Good work....

EXCELLENT!!!! Hot, steamy, raunchy in all the right places! You go girl!

Oooh skillfully done! I am so not into Harry and Hermione but you made this brilliantly sexy inteinteresting. I loved how Harry reacted to everything and that Hermions wasn\'t TOO aggressive. Some stories make her quite aggressive. I like the balance. I still think that even after the kitchen fuck they w hav have been embarassed. I don\'t know about how everyone reacts to having sex with their very best friend since I\'ve never done that, but the tension was great until after the first shag, then they were so comfortable with each other, like they\'d been shagging forever. Maybe add more tension there to show that it took them a while longer to become completely at ease with each other. This was really well written and th elast line there was genius. Very cute! Let me know when you write more!