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for Szajha

by calliopiea

person The Shadow Bandit
schedule August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so glad that you\'ve updated this story. It is well written, fun to read and very entertaining. Looking forward for your next chapter.
person Cherrity
schedule August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I almost never ever review, but when I saw your story here after your have been removed from ff.net. I was estatic. I can\'t wait until the next chapter. Your updates always leave me wanting form more, which I believe is the highest compliment that i can give you.
person Sarryn
schedule August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Exquisite and titillating. This story is a wonder to absorb. Truly a masterpiece.
person n.B.
schedule August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really glad to see that you\'ve updated.
\'Szajha\' was(and is) an exceptional piece of work.
I\'m sure that I\'m not the only one who\'s been waiting, so don\'t keep us too long this time!
person maizeysugah
schedule August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is very well written. I adore it.
person zubave
schedule August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well done! I\'ve enjoyed it thus far. I was pleasantly surprised with your writting. Please, update soon.
person cyn
schedule August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow that...wow..all I can say is that this is the absolute BEST i have ever read....wow...kudos...many many kudos
person arcee
schedule August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely fantastic I can\'t wait for the next chapter . I love Harry taking the situation so well Write more soon please ....
person morgan
schedule July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg! this is a wonderful fic please update soon! i keep on coming back to check and see iu upu updated but then every time
i feel like crying when its not! please go on!
person Maira
schedule July 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hello, I\'m a fan of your work, specially of ha. ha. I read that you\'re incredably busy nowadays, but who isn\'t? I understand how you may feel right now because I myself have been through a lot oressress and my schedule is bigger than the Everest. I\'m just sending this note in hopes that you\'ll find some time to write this fic so many people like because of its original theme and well described acts and such. I also read that you have a writer\'s block so I thought about giving you some ideas even though I know that mine are not as good as yours. So, I gather that Severus and Harry are going to be the new couple just like those two during Grindenwald\'s time and you plan on making some sort of ball for the Debutant\'s iniciation, right? I was thinking about how you were planing on making that fest if you were going to give them all to Voldemort in one single night or something like one per night during a week of celebration- I like this last one better. Then it hit me that you could introduce them all in those fancy dresses they were bound to use in the first night of celebration and then in sepearate fests for the Debutants you could give them something more sexy, not crude or slut like, but sensual that could enhance their beauty.
I was thinking that you could, on Harry\'s ball, dress him like those ancient greeks did but with a bit of oriental arabian mix onto it like enveloping his upper thighs up until his navel in a silk kind of sheet and leave his back exposed, than drap some more silky cloths around some parts of his legs, neck, arms and chest, make him barefeet and with soraceracelets on upper arms, ankles and wrists. A twisted bun would do the match and I think he would be gorgeous. I hope I gave you some help here and good luck with your projects, I hope they\'ll work fine and that you\'ll have some more time to write. Maira