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for Detention can change your life

by Pandora

person Spoonie
schedule May 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry. At least its believeable, he wouldn\'t be able to just come to terms with it and be all shag-happy. Waiting for next bit!
person Valentine
schedule May 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very well done.I can\'t wait to see what happens next.Ever consider being a romance writer .I don\'t usually read slam but your story is so lng Ing I couldn\'t stop reading.Great Job !!!!!!
person Valentine
schedule May 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I know..I ment Slash not slam.Great Job .Want to read more.
person Spoonie
schedule May 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AAAGH! You always do this to us! I love it though. I reckon it me doi doing the can can in a banana suit. More asap!
person Spoonie
schedule May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ah they finally get some lovin! I am glad Harry is on the road to recovery, I hope the two of them can make it to where they want to be - with each other, revenged and happy. Which is wierd coz I\'m not really one for happy endings! I like my angst! The grammer is getting better and although not perfect its a little easier to read through. Spoonie.
person Ivy
schedule May 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I would say I am pretty new to Harry Potter. I am a great lover of slash.
So all this fandom is all new to me. So of course I have skipped right into
slash fanfiction stories. After reading The books\\movies and then
your story and others it was hard to see this pairing not to mention
Ron being such an ass.(Ron being my favorite character) I just couldn\'t see it Ya know.
Generally I will just drop a fic, and go on to the next one, without a second thought.
This piece however, I kept on going,
I actually went weepy when Harry stepped into the Slytherin common room.
Now, I can really see the pairing, Good Job I\'d say.
~*IVY*~
person Spoonie
schedule May 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Harry\'s getting mad! Thats the first step in conquering gits like Ron is in this fic! Get mad, then get even. I like it.
person Lexi
schedule May 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Twas a great story, and it reminded me alot of me and my girlfriend. (Er...I\'m bi...) So...yeah. But they were all totally out of character...and the grammar was bad...but great just the same.
person Spoonie
schedule May 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ah a new chapter or two, lovely! I like that Hermione has come to her senses and is helping Harry. I think this is shaping up into quite a good fic! Well done.
person kiko
schedule May 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
jess:I luv I luv I luv!!!!!!!!
Kiko: yeah its okay I guess
Jess:* confused expression*
Kiko: oh who am I kidding it\'s great!!!
Jess: you complemented it oh my thats rare
both: keep it up write more soon!!!!!