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for Detention can change your life

by Pandora

person reanne080
schedule May 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait to see what happens next. You made the assholes suffer.. heh. One of the greatest revange\'s that I have read to date. Great job making Hermione a lesbian. It fits the story well. Good job.
person Collision
schedule May 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
slytherin harry and his protective boy friend draco hmm..
after seeing ron\'s jealousy tantrum in GoF, i think their coming out could have been met like this, gryffindors can be real stiff necked hypocrites ~~

neat trick with the dreamweaver potion, +)
person Melissa
schedule May 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is absolutely amazing. You show the character\'s feelings in a way that the reader can feel and relate to. You really have to finish the story soon!
person Spoonie
schedule May 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! Meanness in the extreme - I loved it.
schedule May 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic and I\'m so glad that Ron got what was coming to him! I really don\'t like him at all in general! Wonderful chapter as always. Please update soon!
person Sandy
schedule May 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! Almost nothing is as dangerous as someone defending their love!
I hope you let us see what Neville and Seamus get dealt! Especially with Neville\'s fear of Snape.
person Onyx
schedule May 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay the whole this witht eh spider licking Ron, reminded me of when i was like 5 and i had a dream about a spider that licked me...eeewww.....otherwise, paybacks are a bitch.....
person Lyria
schedule May 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I like it a lot. :)

Any chance of pairing Blaise with someone? He seems lonely. He\'s been such a good friend to Harry and Draco, he deserves some happiness.

Other than that, I don\'t have any other suggestions. Keep up the good work!
person Spoonie
schedule May 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hahaha! Slugs! Go Hermione! Is Slytherin gonna be renamed \"Gay Pride House\" or something! LOL at own terrible joke. Bad jokes rule! Anyway, back onto the fic. I am still enjoying it, it does seem to be getting a little repetitive at the moment though, maybe something is needed to move the pace on a little. I can\'t wait for the next bit!
person Raija
schedule May 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Snoring...how manlike. Well I like your story but I hate it when you call Harry an ex-gryffindor all the time.It\'s getting annoying.