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for Detention can change your life

by Pandora

person Jade
schedule June 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is so good i can\'t wait for more
person BloodyTears
schedule June 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story....continue it!!!
person Melissa
schedule June 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story!!
person k-chan
schedule June 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More now !! I love this fic so continue it soon.
person SockGod
schedule June 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
For the most part I really like it, but I\'m an H/D nut:)
I do think yould rld really use a beta though... The grammar could really use the help

I\'m sorta looking for someone to beta for, though I\'m not yet sure if I have any skill^^

Give my an email if your interested *Grins*

Poodles;)
Sock God
person Sandy
schedule June 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey what can I say, I look all the time for updates, and I can be a really picky reader. Love every moment of it.
person Sandy
schedule May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey Dear, Is Chapter 35 important enough to repeat? Other than that, you are doing excellent work.
person Raija
schedule May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
my stomach hurts still....too much laughter....so please continue.
person LVGreed2K
schedule May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading this story about 10 minutes ago and let me just say wow. This was the 1st story I have ever ready that was Potter slash and if there are more out there like this one I\'m going to greatly enjoy finding and reading them.

I like fanfic because when you read it you already know a lot about the characters you can put a face to it and you put other things to the characters like the way they walk or Carrie themselves in general. This story played of that incredibly well. It was so easy picturing Snape storming into his lab or Harry, Ron and Hermione sitting and talkon ton the Hogwarts express. When you see Drako alone in his room and when you read why hes there it\'s easy for you to picture it and understand the author pained such great pictures in your mind. When we learn more about Harry
person Spoonie
schedule May 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet it almost set off my gag reflex! ah haha just a joke. Anyway, its about time Draco talks about his treatment. Spoonie.