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for Detention can change your life

by Pandora

person Anon
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A good plot but the spelling and grammatical errors are very distracting and make the story less than it should be. Spell Checker or a beta would do you wonders
person Kitty-Kat
schedule September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story soooo much. Well I actually only read not even half of it, but I\'m getting there...please don\'t stone me...anyways, so far I only read to the mealtime part..I know I know...I gotta read more. But I just wanted to say that this story is the best so far. The other stories have Ron and the other Gryffindors accepting Harry\'s gayness and some Gryffindors who are gay also. But I guess if you really want to get into other people\'s mind, you are right. Ron and the others wouldn\'t like it. So keep on trucking...hehe..and hopefully when I\'m done reading all of the fan fics of everybody elses I\'ll come back and see if you added anything on. Oh and just so you know you inspired me to write a fan fic of my own..with a new character. Hopefully when I\'m done you can be the first one to it it and send me your advice. I\'d really like it because your such a good writer. I mean I have done a lot of fan fics and I\'m doing my own novel but Harry Potter is a bit harder and I would like your opinion. Thank you.
person shelleykids
schedule August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I would have reviewed every chapter but I just read the whole thing last night. I hope you will be writing more very soon . I loved your story line it has to be one of the fanfics best and I am eargrly awaiting for more in your sequiel lol I hope there is anyway lol

Shelley
person christy
schedule August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great story...better than trouble love..which needs an update...so how is life after Hogwarts
person Chibik0
schedule August 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is so good. I really love it. ^^ Keep up the great work, k? I\'ll be looking forward to read about your other work. Umm, can you inform me when you make new ficcies? If that\'s okay with you.. ^^
person CrossworldNoMiko
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Its a shame Ron had to be such a git. Oh well, Draco was a sweetheart. And Blaise.... my. my... what can I say about our handsome Black Panther? I have a higher appreciation of him now... >=) Hee hee.
person angelluv666
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great story
well written
great show of the problems that cruellity towards someone who is different can create.
Great way howihowing how valuable true friendship as well.
and the disasterous outcomes of bottleing up problems.
You truely are a good auther
person BlueDream
schedule July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I like your story alot. It was interesting. And since Draco and Harry are one of my favorite pairings I have nothing against slash/yaoi. And please, would you write a sequel? I\'d really like to know what happens after. Happy Writing!!! ^_^
person Anon
schedule July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story, but you describe them by their hair entirely too much. It gets really irratating. Other than that, good work!!!!
person Lemon Drop Pricess
schedule July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great job. This is an amazing slash. I hope no one flamed you for making Draco Gay!!! Anyway great job!