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April 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
k, it\'s cool and all, but it\'s sorta freky, i mean Harry and Draco 2gether like that??? i just gotta say that as interestingas ur stories are, the fact that it\'s Draco and Harry will always freak me out a bit...
the idea of the story is great, but I wanna kno wat the gryffindors have against gayness and stuff, bcuz i mean rapin harry just cuz he\'s gay is pretty fucked up, ya kno...
the idea of the story is great, but I wanna kno wat the gryffindors have against gayness and stuff, bcuz i mean rapin harry just cuz he\'s gay is pretty fucked up, ya kno...
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April 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think your story is really good and has great potential, but all the grammatical errors in the story really detract from an awesome plot.
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April 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
sort out your spelling and this could turn out to be a good fic.
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April 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t help but to make an auther happy. Please update soon.
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April 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HI!
nice story, so far so good, exept it seem that you could really use a beta.(someone else to read it over for you and correct the mistakes)
you\'ve made quite a few spelling mistakes and a few grammar mistakes but nothing too drastic..
good luck and keep up the good work
nice story, so far so good, exept it seem that you could really use a beta.(someone else to read it over for you and correct the mistakes)
you\'ve made quite a few spelling mistakes and a few grammar mistakes but nothing too drastic..
good luck and keep up the good work
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April 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
O.K. I\'m reviewing \'cause i lkied it , Now if you update soon, i\'ll keep reviewing \'cause it is very good. That and I seem to be good at cheering my favored authers on. More please. I\'ll give you cookies....