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for De-ageing Draco

by cathankitten

person BLACK*PLAGUE
schedule April 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Bad ,bad evil Ron. Please don\'t have him hurt Draco. Update soon
person sarah
schedule April 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is probly a dumb question but why dosent harry just use his murdurs(bad speli kno know) map to find draco? good story by the way;)
person BLACK*PLAGUE
schedule April 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What happened to little Draco??? Update soon and tell me.
person Charlotte
schedule April 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
really great concept... I\'m impressed. True, there were a few spelling and grammar mistakes ( I\'m not referring to baby-Draco\'s talk), but on the whole I think it\'s a very good idea.
person Sunny
schedule April 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, it actually sort of killed an idea I had in my had, but still, it is great. Poor Draco, how could Narcissa do that and what about Sissy Draco? I like the interaction between Draco and Harry, it is si sweet to see them get along...and Lucius as a caring father, thanks you made him something esle than a monster.
Only one negative to mention, you should check your spelling, sure Draco is baby-talking, so I am not revering to those. There are just several mistakes and it is sort of hard to read the story. But apart from that, great, please write more soon.
person BakaChan
schedule April 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good....I can\'t wait til you update again
person Sparky
schedule April 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is really good, but needs much proof-reading. there were a lot of spelling and grammer mistakes that made it hard to understand parts of the story. however, this is an excellent concept, and very interesting. all in all I\'d give it 3 stars, only because of the spelling and grammer. Ok, can\'t wait for the next chapter.
person sdfghj
schedule April 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ok
person ray
schedule April 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great story!
person Hyperbol
schedule December 15, -0001 at 12:00 AM
*Idly wonders if it was one of the Delshay kids Collin encountered*

Keep going deary, it\'s a good story.