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I\'ve no clue if you\'re still updating this fic or not, but it\'s interesting. It\'s a great idea. If you need a beta to correct the grammer and spelling, I\'d be glad to help you out. Hope to see more from this soon. ^-^

Hey Cathankitten,
If you would like, I have time to do spelling corrections.an\'an\'t say much for the grammar problem as I go by the feel of each sentence.

I\'ve been doing the same for Hogwartsoracle at fanfiction.net for the last six months.
You can get me either at this email or at charyspotter@yahoo.com

Personally I agree with you, people shouldn\'t tell you parings or tell you what a charactes personality is like. It is your story and in the Harry Potter books are generally Harry\'s view on what is going on, and JKR leaves people to come up with their own conclusions. As for spelling errors why should it matter if they occur in your fics? the words are easily recognisable and I am sure most people make silly mistakes occasionally (I known I do!). I don\'t really see why people get so annoyed when others have a few errors here and there, the only errors whichoy moy me are if someone messes up the title, summary or character names.
Anyway, I have enjoyed reading your fic and can\'t wait for more. It is a very intersting plot line and very original, personally I like fics with Lucius a good person as there are too few good ones out there.

For the last time, dear, it\'s MUGGLES. Otherwise damn good story, keep it upeaseease update soon.

Hi, love the story. Quick note, Can\'t believe some readers complain about grammatical errors! Talk about picky. Would like to see them do a LONG fan fic with No errors! (Even Anne Rice makes errors!). This ain\'t professional and it\'s really difficult to spot your own mistakes. (anyone whose done homework or had office and info skills or secretarial skills as a class should know this). Can\'t wait to find out what happens next. Poora ana and Draco.

Ooooo, very twisty of you. very good though. more please. Trixy autherses.

A bad Hermione?!?!?! ^__^ Love it!! Its so rare to see. I can\'t wait for the next chapter.

You could use a beta, methinks. Good concept.

I really like this story. However, I think you need to proofread it before you post it. The way that Draco talks is fine, it\'s just that there are so many grammar mistakes within the rest of the chapters that it gets annoying to read. It just becomes frustrating to have to figure out what you\'re trying to write and still remain ingrossed with the contents (which really are wonderful). Please don\'t misunderstand what I\'m saying; I don\'t intend to be rude, so if I came across that way, I\'m sorry. Really though, the story is very good and I can\'t wait to read the next chapter!

Aaaargh! That was the cliffhanger off all cliffhangers! How cruel! *calms down* Oooh, Draco, so cute! Nice Harry, Nice Lucius, Crazy Narcissa.... it definitely works! What happened to Draco?!?! Maybe the squid got him, or a strange magical creature! Or maybe he just tripped and skinned hiee!?ee!?!? Who knows?!?!? *flourishes arm dramatically* DUNDUNDUH!!!!