rate_review Reviews

Well I\'ve been reading this story since the first post, but this is my first review of it. I love the plotline but I have to admit to being a bit bummed at the Ron/Harry slash. I was hopeing for Lucius/Harry... normally I avoid all Ron slash! But now you have me too hooked to stop reading! ;-) Keep up the good work!

Hee hee. I do like Lucius when he\'s being nice (well, I like him when he\'s being evil, too! LOL!) And Baby Draco is oh so cute... *coos, gives him a cuddle* The father/son bonding scenes between Lucius and wee Draco are so nice (better than sex, even) - well done!

Love & Serpents\' Kisses,
Anath.

Argh. Sorry, I accidentally deleted the e-mail before I could read it. *sighs* I\'m to used to spam. Don\'t suppose it\'s possible to resend when you have the time? Sorry about that.

that was a sweet chapter!
more!

Excuse me for being polite. I think you need to get over yourself. Twisting my words does not help anyone. I was simply putting a comment, and how am i to comment on your fiction? at least that is how that came across. Oh and by the way - try spelling peoples names right, it helps. The reason you hadnt seen my name before is because that was the first time I had read it. I did not yell or scream or use rudeness in my response and you can be sure I will not be reading your fic anymore.

*sigh* I want to start out by saying that this is not a flame. I don\'t want to tell you how to *write* your story. That is your job, and you are doing it *more* than quite well. But you did say in your chapter 14 set of notes that only one [erson had specifically mentioned constructive criticism, and you are right. Just saying spelling and grammar means nothing. Frankly, I agree with what is mostly said about spelling and grammar. If it\'s at least recognizable, it doesn\'t really matter. Spelling has never been my strong point, and typos occur. The only thing I have to say about it is the lack of punctuation at the end of sentences. That, I believe, is what can make it hard to read and decipher as far as certain emotions go. It leaves a sort of.... left hanging feel, I suppose.
As far as plot goes, I think you have exent ent talent. The plot twists are incredible and surprising, especially the way that you built up Ron as being the supposed guilty one, and then having Hermione being driven to it by jealousy. And the original concept of a sister and aging potion... very beautifully thought out. I am impressed.

Uh, major gramatical errors in this one. I could barely understand parts of it. And I thought that this was going to be a Harry/Draco fic, what\'s up with the Ron action? I\'d still like to read more though, if you update this. I do like the way you made Herm so nasty. And when is Draco going to the Zoo?

I think ure story is gr8, i dont personally care about spelling and grammactical mistakes, i mean its only a fan fic! if people wanna submit help for you for YOUR story they can atleast do it nicely. Like i said it has a gr8 plot and i\'m enjoying it so pls write more. :)

*winces* Poor Lucius! Now he knows how we muggles feel when kids our charges get lost. It happened to me one time back when I was not much older than Draco and my brother was around his age. We lost our mom one time at Walmart. A stranger came up to us. I didn\'t know what to tell him, my brother was silent. Shortly we found her. Well hopefully Draco wasnkidnkidnapped. If he was, we know it\'s not Ron and Harry since they have an alibi. So Draco and Harry are like brothers, eh? Good! Harry needs a family. He\'s lost so much already... How did Ginny know Hermione\'s plan? Did Hermione tell her? And how old are Harry and Co? U said this is an AU? So how old???

My mistake. But, O.K. now your getting goofy: you temporaraly lost Draco again, you gave Sev a \"wolf\", and please tell me that poor little Draco doesn\'t walk in on a smooch session. All I can really say is, at least you personally reply to my reviews and this is a really good story anyway. buh-bye