rate_review Reviews

Oh wow. That is surprising! Hermione?????? Keep going, it\'s an interesting plot.

Original and cute. I hope you write more.

Hi dear,
I was reading your wonderful fic De-aging Draco at
AdultFanFicition.Net and there are some words missing in some chapters
and chapters than don\'t exist anymore... anyway could you send the
whole fic to me or tell me if there is another place to get it?.

Thanks a lot.
Besitos
belelfmir

RELOAD CH 29 PLEASE

PLEASE UPDATE!!! I cant wait to see what happens next, please update soon *jumps up and down happily*

^^ Hi! I\'ve read 1-28 so far,and I wanted to say that it\'s really good! But I also think you should know that chapter 28 is missing...I stopped there for now. I\'ll check back later to see if you fixed it. ^^ Bye!

Very interesting story, I like it, but I hear constructive criticism is good for writers so here's what I Didn't like;
I thought this was going to be a Draco/Harry story but I guess I could live with that not happening. But Harry and Ron?? I really don't like that pairing and I found myself skipping chapters just to see if they were still together later on. They were...
I just wish you had put the pairing up in ch 1 so I wouldn't have gotten my hopes up.
Also, I know Narcissa is often thought of as cold and possibly greedy, but I find it quite unrealistic that she killed her own daughter. She could have put a glamour on her and sent her off to live with someone ewhenwhen Dragon was old enough to be Draco. Heartless or not, killing Cora just seems unnecessary.

This is a very cute story. I like it. SO what will happen next? I can't blieve that Draco's mother would do that to him. And Hermione, what a bitch. Update soon.

ACK! You can't leave it there - please update soon and pop off an email to me when you do? Thanks!

Original story/plot concept. It's funny that Severus is getting a larger family than he ever expected.
You have a lot of different plot twists that make for an interesting fic. Oh, and I hate Lockhart. Keep writing!