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by Serenitas

schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This definitely could have made for a story longer than a one-shot, but this was really good. I enjoyed reading Harry's essay. Wonderful job.
person Roe
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this! It's so wonderful and sweet and oh so sad. I'm just glad that Harry and Draco crossed the line...found out that they both knew each other's pain. That they learned to heal one another and love one another. You need to add more to this!
person Remi
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yummy! you rock my undies!
person Keikokin
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, second chapter not needed but it would be nice. This was so well written. I am all a twitter, such a sucker for a hot love story. I especiallyliekd the changing POV and that Harry got to tell Snape what he thought of him. Thanks, please keep writting.
person Aurora
schedule August 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is great! update soon, please! :D
person Samantha
schedule August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, that story was one of the best i have read of every one on this site. please continue. It was so heartfelt that it touched me like no other story has......sorry to get all sappy..*cries* IT NEEDS TO BE A SERIES OR I WILL SEND SNAPE THE GREASY MONKEY ON YOU!!!! THANKS!
person Arabiana
schedule July 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dear God you are one of the most talented writers I\'ve ever seen! Your diction is gorgeous. And Lord, the FEELING you put into the thoughts and words of these characters... It\'s incredibly amazing... All of your stories are, and believe you me, I\'m going to read every single one of them. PLEASE continue this story! It\'s so incredibly RIGHT and TRUE, and it\'s only just started! Please continue to write all of your stories. All of them could be made into even more breath-taking series. Now, I\'m off to read and review all the rest of your stories, and beg for more in my reviews. ^_^

Worshipfully,
Arabiana
person mikochef22
schedule May 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
One word. BEAUTIFUL! Thank You Very Much !