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July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story, keep it coming!
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July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You really hit your stride in the last two chapters. I\'m happy to
see that is Snape is in-character and has that wonderfully untouchable mystique surrounding him. When Liz was a student,
I like that fact that you kept him indifferent and cold to her teenage angst. He certainly wouldn\'t soften up just for
melodramatics of teenage girl\'s attempt to end it all. Now that she\'s a woman and therefore considered bedroom worthy, he\'s
still the one calling the shots - though she pleas indifference: he knows different. That all it takes is a few calculated touches
here and there to make her turn toward him again - and then once he has her rapt attention, he\'ll make her beg for him until he sees fit to reward her with what she\'s always secretly desired of him.
You gave a slight background to Liz. She has an attraction for nasty men (ala the Death Eater she had a rotten marriage with ) that don\'t seem to give her the sort of attention she\'s craving inside. Though an adult, shes an incomplete woman looking for completeness -- will she find this by making her fantasy come true with Snape? This could be interesting. The formatting of your text
is off and wraps oddly. You may want to clean this up as it\'s a bit difficult to read. But I think you have the basis for
a very interesting storyline and do hope you allow your Snape Muse to continue.
see that is Snape is in-character and has that wonderfully untouchable mystique surrounding him. When Liz was a student,
I like that fact that you kept him indifferent and cold to her teenage angst. He certainly wouldn\'t soften up just for
melodramatics of teenage girl\'s attempt to end it all. Now that she\'s a woman and therefore considered bedroom worthy, he\'s
still the one calling the shots - though she pleas indifference: he knows different. That all it takes is a few calculated touches
here and there to make her turn toward him again - and then once he has her rapt attention, he\'ll make her beg for him until he sees fit to reward her with what she\'s always secretly desired of him.
You gave a slight background to Liz. She has an attraction for nasty men (ala the Death Eater she had a rotten marriage with ) that don\'t seem to give her the sort of attention she\'s craving inside. Though an adult, shes an incomplete woman looking for completeness -- will she find this by making her fantasy come true with Snape? This could be interesting. The formatting of your text
is off and wraps oddly. You may want to clean this up as it\'s a bit difficult to read. But I think you have the basis for
a very interesting storyline and do hope you allow your Snape Muse to continue.
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June 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Help I want MORE PLEASE! I have been waiting please don\'t tell me that was the end??
Thanks, Kim I followed you over from fanfic.net
Thanks, Kim I followed you over from fanfic.net
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June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HEY! THis isn\'t the end is it?
This is wonderful! More! MOre! More!
Zee
This is wonderful! More! MOre! More!
Zee
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May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great! Much better chapter, hope it is not the end. Glad to see you are back. Thanks for update
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May 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I was in the middle of chapter 7 when I read the part about pasty legs sticking out of shorts and I couldn\'t stop laughing! I like it so far, very well written. I need to go to sleep now, but I CAN\'T STOP READING!
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May 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! MORE MORE MORE! I cannot wait to read more!!! Please!!!
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May 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You know me from FanFic. Glad your here and I am waiting for update. You know I think your story is wonderful and your are doing a great job. Keep it up. Thanks
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May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG keep goign! Yes! update it plzzz this si so neat. damn i wanna be her! lol
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May 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is great. can\'t wait for ch :) :)