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An interesting addition though she did not wish too much control apparently. hehe Please keep writing.

Some lessons are so hard and she is fortunate to have someone who cares to help her learn and to teach. The lessons are never easy. I hated lessons like that one. They cnd tnd they hurt but in the end it was necessary. I applaud your story and am eager to read more of it!

this is by far my favorite hp fic on this entire site! i love it. it is usually the only one i search for updates for. i can\'t wait to read the next chapter. you\'re doing an awesome job! keep it up!

one of the best fan fics ever!!!!!!!!! i regret that elizabeth is not hermione, but its good anywyas. i luv it! keep writing

WOW this story is wonderful. I love the way you\'ve kept up with the true character of Snape that makes him so compelling. And I think that when people write fics they often change his character and make him too slushy and feeling the moment he sleeps with someone when really being an ex-deatheater he would be used to cold unfeeling sex. I think it would take a lot to get under his skin and it would need to be deeper than sex. I think you\'ve been able to do it though and make it believable as a plot well done.
Was Snape still a deatheater when they raped her then? Or was he spying for Hogwarts?

It\'s a lovely story. Please continue to write.......

WOW. Absolutely lovely story so . . . . .please update!

I just checked this fic out again last eve and was surprised and glad to see you had written two more chapters.
The sex scene was a bit more perfunctory than I had expected (seeing as the chptr prior was dripping with sensual promise) but then perhaps Snape was trying to approach her in a distant manner so as not to provoke his want and need to have her again physically. I\'m certain this will backfire on his - s - seeing that your cliffhanger left us with him knocking upon her door...what could this late night call be for? hm. ;)

I really appreciated your little twist and revelation as we come to find out that he saved her life yet AGAIN. But before that, the scene starts out with a provocative question on Snape\'s part: \"Was I everything you ever dreamed of?\" and she then proceeded to belittle the reality of him in comparison to what perfection she had always imagined about his character. Walking away from him - leaving him with his flawed self. Which leaves us with a double message about Snape. Does he have a vested interest in this woman-no-longer-a-girl even though he continuous to acts cold and aloof?

Btw, I\'ve reviewed your fic quite a while ago on my site Dark Potions. Do keep up this story - it has potential!
http://firefancies.com/darkpotions/main.htm

~Mys Duende

I could not go without reviewing this.

No other fic has ever made me want more and more like The Last Potion. Your writing is brilliant and your language perfect. The way you describe everything is so well done and done in a classy fashion. The sex scenes were very good indeed. The speech at the end amazed me, Elizabeth has been through a lot and I truly feel sorry for her character. As for Snape, well, Snape was so much in character it amazed me.

I hand you a trophy, well done...

~blue ribbon~

Yes!!! you updated and with a real good chapter. Please update more. I really enjoy this story and would like to see it all the way.
Thanks