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Awww, cliffy :(. More I say! I demand more! Though my favorite line so far has go to be "you ugly hippogriff

I like it dahling. Sorry it took me so long to read it, but I'm finally done with rehearsals, so I could read it.

I think it'd probably be better if you made the chapters longer. Keep writing dahling, and good luck deciding between the dark and light!!

♥ *hmm, wonder if that works here...*

The chapter was good, what I found incongrous though is your claim that harpy eagles have 9 foot wingspans (3 meters) that's rather large.

Hm... As I've stated for most of my friends writing (go figure, I'm the only one who doesn't do this series), not knowing the characters or terms used is a damper for me with these stories. Writing-wise however, I was pretty impressed. For your first attempt ever you've done extremely well, and I'm not surprised to see that hit counter so high. No real spelling errors I saw either. ^_^ Way to go you.

Lol, it doesn't look very smutty yet, and considering the pairings (and my own well known quirks), I'm relieved... Though I bet you'll handle that like a pro. All that pent up aggression and such. ^_~ Thanks for giving me the address to check this out! *huggles*

I was interesting. I can't wait for more so update as soon as possible.

It's awesome!! 5 out of 5!!! It's about time someone wrote a fucked up story about harry potter. ^.^

Great story, well written and wonderful use of language and flow, I love how you depicted their characters and some of your choice of words are very witty and the scene with the desk was very amusing as well. You really pulled the story together and kept things tense and interesting in the first chapter. I am curious about what will be happening to Harry and the others and especially Hermione! Can't wait to see what's going to end up happening next!

Very vivid, great use of characters. your writing paints a lovely pic in in my mind, the words just dance of the page. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Looks as if this story is going to turn out well. I like the writing style and it will be great to see how the intense sexual scenes develop and play into the story. Keep me posted!

The story seems to have started out well, with an interesting twist on who Harry's love interest is. I also found it interesting how you refer to Malfoy as the Slythryn Prince with the upcoming novel "The Half Blood Prince" from J.K. Rowling. Perhaps a bit of foresight on your part? Either way it's a good start.