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for Look Before You Leap

by LadyFlame

person Slashy Snitch
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, you said you wanted a eview, so here it is: i really like this story; its quite different from some of the others ive read. gj!

Harry and Draco Are Meant To Be Because:

5. Because they hate to be embarrased in front of each other.
4. Because we all know you tease the one you love.
3. Because Malfoys always get what they want.
2. Because Draco lets Harry see him cry.
1. Because opposites attract.

Slashy Snitch
person Slashy Snitch
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AND?!?!?!? Wheres the next chapter, woman? im getting anxious! how dare you set a cliff hanger? that is very very very very very...x one million very's mean of you! Ugh!!! but i rated it a 5, just cuse i want the next chapter, and you are such a good writer! ciao!
person Aninimous
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More...I WANT MORE!!! Gawd, it takes talent to leave off at such a catching cliffhanger. Kudos, darling!! ^^
person aphasia
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That is alot of UST.. please please continue. Awsome storytelling, why'd Draco get a phoenix?
person derangedbetty
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That ..had to be the hottest yet cruelest cliffhanger on the face of the earth. Please hurry up with chapter 4 or else I'll drown myself in misery ;[ Btw, when I was reading chapter 2, I didn't know that he hadn't fixed Harry's ..ever so convenient problem so I was thinking, 'it'd be really hot if Draco decided to "kiss Harry's booboo and make it all better." Of course, reading so much yaoi has that affect on you. XD I always jump right to the sex in my ahead before the boys can even say a proper hello. Ah, how dreadfully awful teenage hormones are don't you think? -_-
person Redlightspin
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the story the cliffies kinda cruel though
person Dezra
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And how does Harry respond? More please.
person katie.e
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was hot!!!
keep updating, your doing great.
person Sarah
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! Please update. Please. I wanna read more, mainly because I really like this story and you've got me hooked. So please update soon.
-Love Sarah
person Lilth
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the whole virtual slave offer. I really like the story and just wanted to reveiw as say that can't wait for chap.4.